大学英语写作讲座二

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,*,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,Natural resources are very limited.They will be exhausted in the near future.It is not true.But it becomes a major concern around the world.This is a widely accepted fact.,It is a widely accepted fact that,there is a major concern around the world for the exhaustion of limited natural resources in the near future,，,though it is unlikely to be true.,I.,句式的多样化,1.,巧用连接词,大学英语写作讲座,(,二,),：句型,The Mississippi River is one of the longest rivers in the world,，,and in spring time it often overflows its banks,，,and the lives of many people are endangered.,The Mississippi River,，,which is one of the longest rivers in the world,，,often overflows its banks in the spring time,，,endangering the lives of many people.,2.,改变句子开头,2-1.,用副词开头,Early,to bed and early to rise,makes a man healthy,wealthy and wise.,-Benjamin Franklin(American president),早睡早起会使人健康、富有和聪明。,美国总统富兰克林,.B.,2-2.,用同位语开头,That is one of the rewards of competition,:,you can drop down a couple of notches on the food chain to be as brutal,unsympathetic,selfish and inhuman as you wish in the name of competition.,-Howard Mel,American writer,这就是竞争所得到的一种报酬：你可以将自己在食物链上的身份降低几个档次，打着竞争的旗号，随你所愿地野蛮、无情、自私和不人道,.,美国作家梅尔,.H.,2-3.,用状语开头,Where there is no hope,there can be no endeavor.,-,Sanuel,Johnson(British writer and critic),哪里没有希望，哪里就不可能有努力。英语作家、评论家约翰逊,.S,2-4.,用表语开头,Equally essential to the highest success in learning a language,are intense interest plus persistent effort.,2-5.,用宾语开头,My advice,you would not listen to,；,my helps,you laughed at.Now you will have what you asked for.,2-6.,以短语修饰语开头,1,）以介词短语开头,Without health,no pleasure can be tasted by man.,-Henry,Bollingbroke,British statesman,没有健康就没有乐趣。,英国政治家博林布鲁克。,H.,2,）以分词短语开头,Disturbed by the discord of American life in recent decades,，,Menchester,took flight for the pacific islands.,3,）以不定式短语开头,To do whatever needs to be done,to preserve this last and greatest basin of freedom.,-,Ronald Reagan,American president 为了保住这最后的、最伟大的自由堡垒，我们必须尽我们所能。美国总统里根.R.,3.,否定句,The man who has made up his mind to win will,never,say impossible.,-,Bonapart,Naploeon,(French emperor),凡是决心取得胜利的人是从来不说“不可能的”。法国皇帝拿破仑,.,Do not,for one repulse,give up the purpose that you resolved to effect.,_-William Shakespeare(British dramatist),不要只因一次失败，就放弃你原来决心想达到的目的。,英国剧作家莎士比亚,W,4.,条件句,+,反问句,If,winter comes,can,spring be far behind?,-P.B.Shelley,(British poet),冬天来了，春天还会远吗？,英国诗人雪莱，,P.B.,If,your Riches are yours,why dont you,take them with you to the other world?,-,Benjiamin,Franklin(American president),如果财富是你的，那么你为什么不把它们和你一起带到另一个世界去呢？,美国总统富兰克林,.B.,5.,比较级,&,最高级,Sloth,like rust,consumes,faster than,labor wears.,-Benjamin Franklin(American president),懒惰像生锈一样，比操劳更能消耗身体。,美国总统富兰克林。,B.,Sometimes one,pays most for,the things one gets for nothing.,-Albert Einstein,American scientist,有时候一个人为不花钱得到的东西付出的代价最高。,美国科学家爱因斯坦,.A.,6.,长短句交插,（,1,）,We can imagine the beautiful surroundings.,（,2,）,There are many trees along the streets.,（,3,）,There is a clean river in the city.,（,4,）,There are many fishes in the river.,（,5,）,There are willow trees on the one side.,（,6,）,There are some pieces of grassland on the other side.,（,7,）,There are many flowers on them.,（,1,）,Just imagine,the beautiful surroundings,if,we make our cities greener.,（,2,）,Green trees line the streets.,（,3,）,A clean river winds through the city,，,in which,a lot of fishes abound.,（,4,）,On the one side stand,rows of willow trees.,（,5,）,On the other side lies,a stretch of grassland sprinkled with many yellow and red flowers.,II.,文章开头句型,1.,对立观点,Nowadays,the problem of whether teenagers should be equipped with a cell phone,has aroused public concern,.,Some people believe,that holding a cell phone is helpful for parents to connect with their children.,But others hold,that children will lose their freedom because of the easy contact.,As for me,I am on the first/second side of the argument.,When it comes to,breeding,some think that,parents should care about all things of their children.,However,other people think that,kids should grow up by themselves.,As far as I am concerned,the second view is preferable.,2.,设问,Now most people get their news and information about things that are happening at home and abroad from the Internet.,But shall we always believe the information which those webs give us?,“Why have I chosen to attend college?Is the four year academic life worthwhile?”,I have asked myself these questions many times in the past two years.,3.,假设对话,One of the best qualities that most people admire in others is the willingness to admit ones mistake.,“Peter,tune that music down!”,“I was wrong,and you were right about that.”,4.,描写场景,At offices and plants across the country,a growing number of workers are jogging along the streets,playing tag-of-war,and doing exercises on the pavements,all with the support and enco