曾慧勤初一作文

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,Introduce your friend,介绍你的朋友,Guess: Who is she?,Introduce your friend,介绍你的朋友,思考：,阅读,“,包子姐姐 ”对她朋友的介绍，找出介绍他人时应该注意哪些写作因素？要包含哪些内容？,I have a friend and his names,Kimi,.,Hes five years old and hes a student,.,Hes,from Taiwan,and,he,like,s,drinking milk,and,singing songs,. H,is father is an actor and a singer. He loves his father very much. We are best friends and we often play together. Do you want to make friend with him?,What about your friend?,姓名,年龄,籍贯,身份,兴趣爱好,家庭,姓名,时态,Introduce your friend,人称,班级年级,兴趣爱好,朋友,职业（身份）,籍贯,家庭,Hello, everyone. My name,is,Cao,Huaen,and my English name,is,Grace.,Im,four,years old and,I,m from,Taiwan.,Im,a student.,I like,listening to the music and,singing songs,.,This is,my friend and,his names,Kimi,.,H,e,s from,Taibei,too,.What about you?,Personal information,First,Name:,Kimi,Last,name:,Lin,Age:,5,From:,Taiwan,Occupation(职业),:,Student,Hobbies,(,爱好）:,sing,songs,and play toy car,Friend:,Grace(Cao Huaen),一审：,认真,审题,，找出,题目规定需要,表达的要点,Read the given topic carefully and find out the requirements from it.,Step1,审,(search),请你用英文写一篇简单的介绍他人的文章。这个人可以是你的朋友，家人，亲戚或者是你喜爱的偶像明星。,1.,介绍的内容包括姓名，年龄，籍贯，兴趣爱好等等,2,. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。,3.,词数：60,字左右,。标题不计入总词数。,4.参考词汇：hobby, be interested in（对.感兴趣）,审,(search),人称：,时态：一般现在时,Step1,二审：,审人称，时态,自我介绍：用第一人称,I,介绍他人：用第三人称,he/she/,人名,用简单的句子或短语,列出,自我介绍时需要介绍的内容,列,(list),List the key points. You can use mind-map.,Step 2,朋友,姓名班级,Introduce your friend,姓名,籍贯,兴趣爱好,职业,自己能做的事,自我介绍内容,具体英语表达,姓名,My names./ Im.,Her/His names./ He/She is.,班级年级,Im in Class_ Grade_.,He/She/人名. is in Class_Grade_.,籍贯,Im from.= I come from.,She/He/人名 is from. =,She/ He/人名 comes from,Im a Chinese/,Japanese,/,Canadian,（国人),人称,第三人称单数,she/he,时,态,一般现在时,be,动词用,is,Name,（名字）,Age,（年龄）,Job(,工作或者身份）,Country,（国籍）,like,favorite,have,自我介绍内容,具体英语表达,职业,（身份）,student teacher singer,worker,doct,or,actor nurse,policeman,driver,(司机),farmer,(农民）,soldier,(军人）,manager(,经理),Im a/an teacher/ student/ doctor/ actor.,兴趣爱好,eg:,My favorite season is summer, because I can swim in summer.,My,favoritesport/colour/season/food,/,fruit,is,because ,eg:I like eating apples,because its good for us.,I,like+V-ing, because,自我介绍内容,具体英语表达,朋友,This is my friend and his/her name is,This is Wang,Lingling,and her English name is,I have a good friend and his/her name is,(,可简单介绍朋友的籍贯，身份，班级年级， 兴趣爱好）,家庭,I have a brother and a sister.They are my friends too. My brothers name is Daming and my sisters name is Lucy. They like playing table tennis.,This is my. She/He likes playing.,This is my. Her/His favorite sport/colour/food/season is.,(可简单介绍自己的家庭成员，他们的姓名，年龄兴趣爱好）,自我介绍内容,具体英语表达,自己能做的事情,eg: I can cook meals, because learn it from my mother., I can do sth.,加,(add),加,首尾,句,，使,文章更为流畅，结构更加严谨,可以采取,总分总,结构或者,总分,结构，开 头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。,Add,a beginning,and,an ending,to the body.,Step 3,self-introduction,开头,I have a friend.,结尾,What about you,r friend?,Tell me something about you,r friend.,Do you want to make friends with,him?,思考：,“,包子姐姐,”,的自我介绍还可以添加和完善哪些内容？,家庭,I have a brother and his name is Joe. He speaks English well and he likes singing songs too. We both love our mum and dad,.,自己能做的事情,I can help my father cook the meals and do some housework.,Hello, everyone. My name is,Cao,Huaen,and my English name is,Grace. Im four,years old and I,m from Taiwan.,Im a student. I like listening to the music and,singing songs,. This is my friend and his names,Kimi,. H,e,s from,Taibei,too.,What about you?,打招呼,结尾,连,(connect),恰当运用,关联,词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。,Make your writing more fluently by using connections.,Step 4,I have a friend,and,his names,Kimi,.,Hes five years old,and,hes a student,.,Hes,from Taiwan,and,he,like,s,drinking milk,and,singing songs,. H,is father is an actor,and,a singer. He loves his father very much. We are best friends,and,we often play together.,What about your friend?,and 表示并列,除and之外，我们还接触过什么连接词呢？,思考,I like eating apples,but,my friend Tony doesnt like them.,Wanghui is my friend,but,she is not in my class.,I can swim,but,she cant.,but 表示转折,I like eating apples,because,its good for us.,I,can cook meals,because,learn it from my mother.,because 表示原因,Personal information,First,Name:,Kimi,Last,name:,Lin,Age:,5,From:,Taiwan,Occupation(职业),:,Student,Hobbies,(,爱好）:,sing,songs,and play toy car,Friend:,Grace(Cao Huaen),Writing practice,Step 5,Have a try,Homework,你因故转学到另一所学校，作为新同学，老师让你在班上做个简单的自我介绍。请用英文写一篇自我介绍。题目自拟。,1.自我介绍的内容包括姓名，年龄，籍贯，兴趣爱好等等,2,. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。,3.,词数：60,字左右,。标题不计入总词数。,4.参考词汇：hobby, be interested in（对.感兴趣）,Writing practice,