基础写作类型(复习)

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,基础写作类型复习,最近你班开展了一次关于“未来的生活是什么样子”的讨论，同学们提出不同的看法。请你用英语描述这一次讨论,并提出自己的看法。,写作内容如下：,看法1：未来生活更方便舒适；随着科技的发展，交通和能源等问题将达到解决,看法 2：未来生活将变得更糟；环境恶化，气候变暖，地球将不再适合人类居住讨论结果没有得出结论,【写作要求】只能使用5句话表达全部内容。,一、描述两种对立观点+自己观点,1、表达不同看法常用一般现在时,Some,think,that,While,others,believe,that,2、运用多种句型表达，避免单一或重复,Some think that because,hold the opinion that,view,While others argue that,agree,believe,support the opinion that,prefer to think that,Recently our class have had a discussion about what life will be like in the future, but no conclusion has been drawn.,Some students believe that our life will be more comfortable and convenient. They are sure that with the development of science and technology, the problems of traffic jams and shortage of resources will be solved. While others hold the opinion that our life will get worse and worse. Their reason is that our environment will get worse and the earth will be warmer and warmer so that it will be unfit for human beings to live on it. As for me, our future will be much better as I am sure that we can solve all the problems we have now with advanced science and technology.,介绍人物写作特点：,1）介绍生平、概括,出生年月日地，职业，,2）外貌性格,3）工作或教育经历,4）主要成就,5）评价,二、介绍人物,开门见山：,., who is , was born in on.in,Born onin , is ,Born into a family, . Is,was born in,graduate from university,go to .to go on with ones education,receive a doctors degree,devote oneself to,was born in,graduate from university,go to .to go on with ones education,receive a doctors degree,devote oneself to,姓名,李东,性别,男,出生年月,1958年2月,出生地,北京,职业,教授,主要经历,1978年,毕业于,北京大学,并赴,英国,留学,1981年在英国牛津大学,获得博士学位,1982年,回国后,在北京大学,物理系任教,贡献,献身于,物理学研究，多项研究成果得到党和国家政府的,高度评价,Professor Li Dong was born in Beijing in February, 1958. He graduated from Beijing University in 1978,and then,went to England to go on with his education. He received a doctors degree at Oxford University in 1981.,Since,he returned home in 1982, he has been working at the Physics Department of Beijing University. He,has devoted,himself to the research of physics,and,a number of his achievements are spoken highly of by the Party and the government.,介绍地点,1）介绍地点时应用“一般现在时”,进行写作；,2）文中一般包括以下要素：,地理位置；人口；历史；,气候；教育；经济；工农业生产；,风景名胜等。,三、介绍地点,3）介绍地点的一般写作顺序：,地理位置+总体描述,面积+历史/ 人口,气候特征,历史文化/风景名胜,经济（特产/旅游/工农业）,4）写作句型,a) 地理位置 + 总体描述：,xx , which is, lies in is located in ,Located in, XX is .,Lying in, XX is ,XX,is located in,.,with,to,its west and to its east.,b) 面积+人口/历史,XX covers an area of square kilometers,with a population ofand a history ofyears.,Having a history of years, XX covers an area of square kilometres with a population of,Covering an area of , XX has a population of.,The history of dates back toyears ago.,c)气候特征,It is wet cold wet windy in,It rains a lot little in,It is with very little rainfalls snowfalls.,There is a varieties of climate in XX, so in the east it is while in the west it is,Climate is different from place to place and ,in summer winter autumn spring,all the year round,most of the year,in the east west north south,d)历史文化/名胜,XX has a lot of places of interest, among which XXX attracts a lot of visitors from XXXX every year.,XX is famous for its historical sites, such as (, in which ),XX is famous for its beautiful scenery, ,XX has been a popular destination for tourists.,Famous for, XX has become the most popular tourist attraction.,be rich in natural resources,e) 经济/工农业等,plays an important part in its economy.,XX is rich in. ，which makes it the most important in,XX is home to,根据下列情境说明，以“The Town Of Liwan”为题，写一篇介绍荔湾镇的短文。,必须用5句话表达所有的信息内容。,位置,广东省,东,北部,的名镇,面积,2830.54平方公里,人口,630，478,气候,终年温暖、潮湿；夏季多雨,历史,近2000年,名胜,建于1200前的普宁寺；温泉中外闻名，吸引中外游客,特产,西瓜、桔子,经济状况,旅游业起重要作用,Located in the northeast of Guangdong Province, the Town of Liwan is one of the famous towns. It covers an area of 2830.54 square kilometers with a population of 630,478. It is warm, wet all the year round here with a lot of rainfall in summer. Having a history of nearly 2000 years, Liwan has many places of interest, among which the Puning Temple, built 1200 years ago, and the Hot Spring attract a good many tourists from every corner of the world. The town has varieties of fruits, such as water melons and oranges and tourism plays an important part of its economy.,介绍学校,假设你是李华，你的笔友Jane准备暑假来你校参观，想请你介绍一下学校情况。下面是你校的基本信息，请根据以下内容给Jane回一封信，并表示欢迎她来参观。,学校名称,广东第三中学,地理位置,离大海约15公里的一个小镇上,学校历史,80多年历史的老学校,师生人数,老师200多人，学生3000多人，高中学段,校园环境,占地近15万平方米，学校很美，有花草，大树，三座教学大楼，6座宿舍楼,学习课程,中文、数学、科学、英语、计算机、体育、美术等,Dear Jane,I am very glad to tell you something about our school, Guangdong No. 3 Middle school.,It,lies in a small town about 15 kilometres away from the sea,and it,has a history of over 80 years.,Our school,covering an area of nearly 150 thousand square meters, has more than 200 teachers and 3000 senior students.,It,has three teaching buildings and six dormitory buildings, with many flowers and tall trees all around, so its very beautiful.,In our school,we learn Chinese, maths, science, English, computer, PE, arts and some other subjects.,We,warmly welcome you to visit our school in the summer holidays.,Best wishes.,Yours sincerely,Li Hua,基础写作,The egg-shaped,National Grand Theatre is,at the west of,the Great Hall of People.,The main building,consist,of,an opera house, a concert hall and two theatres. And,there is,also an underground garage/ parking lot,which can hold,1,000 automobiles and 1,500 bicycles. Outside,there is,a man-made lake,that covers an area of,35,500 square meters,surrounding,the National Grand Theatre. The most important part of the theatre the golden opera house where opera and ballet will be put on,can seat/ hold,2,416 people.,介绍国家大剧院,Dear Mary,It is a pleasure to introduce some Chinese traditional festivals and special types of food to you.,During our biggest festival, the Spring Festival, which falls on the first day of the first lunar month, we usually eat dumplings to express our hope for wealth in the next year. On the Lantern Festival, which is celebrated on the fifteenth day of the first lunar month, we eat sweet and delicious,tangyuan, which stands for reunion, harmony and happiness. The Dragon Boat Festival falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month, on which we eat,zongzi,in memory of the great poet Qu Yuan. We eat moon cakes on the Mid-Autumn Festival, which is on the fifteenth day of the eighth month, to celebrate a good harvest. Nowadays, Chinese have public holidays on these festivals, which adds to the festival atmosphere around the country.,Best wishes!,Yours,Mike,四、介绍节日,你的美国笔友Mike 想请你在他们的校报上介绍一下中秋节的情况。请你根据下面的短文提纲写,一篇短文,。,中秋节简介,时间：每年阴历八月十五日。是中国最重要的传统节日之一,范围：中国及亚洲其他一些国家都会庆祝。,象征：人们认为那天的圆圆的月亮是团圆，运气，财富的象征。,方式：在那一天，人们通常回家与家人团聚，共进晚餐，互相传达祝福。人们还会吃月饼 一种圆圆的饼，里面有肉，果仁，鸡蛋等。,The Mid-autumn Festival, which is,one of,the most traditional festival,s,in China,falls on,August 15 of,the lunar calendar,every year. Not only is it popular in China, but it is also celebrated in many,other Asian,countries. People believe that the full moon on that day is,a symbol of,reunions, luck and wealth, and,it is a custom,to,express best wishes to,the beloved ones at this particular time. On that day people usually go back home to,have family reunions,enjoying a large meal,with their families. They will also eat moon cakes, which are round cakes with meat, eggs,nut,s and other things inside.,五、介绍伦敦奥运会,As we all know, the,30th,Summer Olympic Game,s will be held,in London, capital of Britain, which is one of the biggest cit,ies,in the world. The London Olympic Games, whose mascot is Wenlock, will,open,on July 27th, 2012 and,close,on August 12th, 2012. Its reported that there are more than six million tickets in all which have been sold,since,2011.,It is the third time that,the Summer Olympic Games,have been held in,London, which makes London,the first city to,hold the Summer Olympic Games three times. The Organizing Committee of London Olympics will,learn,how to carry out the measures of preventing pollution successfully,from,the Beijing Olympic Games.,基础写作,2011年第26届世界大学夏季运动会在深圳顺利举行。以下是一些相关信息：,事件,第26届世界大学生运动会（the Universiade),举办城市,深圳,举办时间,8月12日8月23日,代表团数,152,运动员数,7685,金牌榜,中国：75枚金牌，145枚奖牌榜首,俄罗斯：42枚金牌第二,韩国：28枚金牌第三,写作内容：1）介绍第26届大学生运动会的大致情况,2）介绍本届大运会的金牌榜前三名得奖情况,介绍26界大学生运动会,Starting from August 12, the 26,th,Universiade, the largest-ever one,lowered its curtain,on August 23. During the twelve days, the city of Shenzhen,saw,as many as 7,865 young athletes from 152,delegations competing,in the events. As the host country of the Games, China also turned out to be,the biggest winner,of this Universiade. She,topped the medal table,with history-making 75 golds( gold medal) and a total of 145 medals. Russia,followed,with 42 golds and South Korea,finished third,with 28 golds.,六、今昔对比类,1)一定要把握时态的运用，时态通常是,一般现在时和一般过去时。,2)写作格式：,提出主题句对过去情况的描述对现在情况的描述总结句。（建议用这种方法）,3）当然，也可以对今、昔进行,逐条对比,。,开头常用句型,(1),Great changes have taken place,in in the last past years.,Quite a few changes have taken place,in since .Over the past twenty years or so,great changes have taken place,in our life,.,(2),Things have begun to improve since,（自从,以来，事情有了好转,/,改善）例：,Things have begun to improve since,schools were called on to reduce learning load.,(3),There is an increasing tendency that ,There is an increasing number of who which,对比常用句型: (1)used to, but now nowadays,过去常，但是现在(2) in the past, but now,在过去，但是现在(3) once, but now,曾经.，但是现在(4) Things are different now.,情况已大不同了(5) But now, everything has changed. 但是现在全变了,基础写作：,With the time on, there is an increasing tendency that more and more tourists have been paying greater attention to environment protection.,However, several years ago,as we know, in the places of interest some tourists threw away rubbish,here and there, such as plastic bags, waste paper, tins and so on.,Besides, some of them climbed the trees,picked flowers,freely,and even marked their names on the plants.,Whats worse, some of them,lacked the sense of safety,and smoked in the forest, by which the forest fire was caused.,To our delight, in the recent years,great changes have taken place,among the tourists who will,take away,rubbish,with them,when they leave.,Whats more, they care the plants a lot and the smokers dont smoke in the forest in order not to start fire.,请按照下面表格内容提示，写一篇题为“Changes in Our Life”的英语短文。,20年前,现在,联系方式,写信,打电话、发邮件,信息渠道,听收音机或看报纸,看电视或上网,住房情况,小、拥挤、家具少,大、宽敞，公寓房,结论,20年的变化给人们的生活带来舒适和方便,Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life.,Twenty years ago, people contacted each other,mainly by letter,and they listened to the radio or read newspapers for news and information. Besides, they lived in small crowded rooms with little furniture. Nowadays, however, we can,make phone-calls,or,send emails,to keep in touch with each other and we can get a lot of information by watching TV or surfing the Internet. Another big change is that we have moved into big spacious apartments.,In short, changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience.,常用句型：,1)提出建议的过渡句型,Here is my suggestion. My suggestion is,as follows,. ,My suggestions are listed,as follows,.,Id like to share some,suggestions with you.,Im more than glad to give you my,advice.,Please allow me to give my,suggestions,.,七、建议信,2）表达建议的常用句型,I would like to suggest that(should) If I were you, I would . It seems that you can Youd better What I suggest is that My suggestion is that Its a good idea to The most important thing is that. It is necessary important for you to You can,might as well,+ V,Youd better + V,Why not +V?,注意运用过渡连接词,3）提出建议后的结束语,I am sure you can make progress as long as you .,I hope you will find these suggestions practical useful helpful beneficial.,I hope that these suggestions can be of help to you.,基础写作（满分15分）：,假设你是李华，你的笔友王辉来信询问你如何才能提高英语写作水平。请根据下面的提示写一封回信，给他提出一些建议。,【写作内容】,1.背诵优美的句子和短文，为写作打下坚实的基础,2.养成写英语日记的好习惯, 可以复习词汇和句型,3.阅读一本有关写作技巧的书籍,4.多听、多说、多读、多写，注重积累,【写作要求】只能用5个句子表达全部内容，信的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总句数。,【词汇提示】积累accumulate ; 为打下坚实的基础lay a solid foundation for,Dear Wang Hui,I,am more than glad to,receive your letter asking for advice on how to improve your writing ability.,Now Id like to share some suggestions with you,.,As we all know,recitation is,the basis of,writing and therefore you can recite as many beautiful sentences and articles as possible,which,will lay a solid foundation for writing.,Whats more, its a good habit to keep diaries in English and by doing so, you can review words and patterns.,Also,knowing some writing skills is necessary, so you might as well read a writing book, which will guide you to write well. The most important thing is to listen, speak, read and write,as much as you can,because,practice makes perfect,and,I am convinced if you keep accumulating and practicing, you are sure to write well.,I hope you will find these suggestions useful. .,Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua,求职信的写作结构：,称呼，,1：信息来源；,表明求职心愿,2：,介绍个人简历，摆出求职优势，,提出获职信心或打算,3：,请求答复,；提供联系方式；,表明感激之情,求职信,假定你是李华，,一位17岁的女孩，英语成绩非常突出，有两年英语家教的经验，现在是学校“爱心俱乐部”的成员，认为志愿工作能够使人树立信心，培养良好的交际技能。,看到下面这则招聘信息，,你愿意利用这次机会，为需要帮助的儿童献出自己的微薄之力，同时增长见识，了解社会。,【写作内容】根据所给中文、英文提示，写一篇求职信,【写作要求】必须用5个句子表达全部所给的内容；,将5个句子组织成连贯的短文；开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总句数,loving Heart Club,Dear Students Union,I have just read the ad,on the school bulletin,and the moment I saw it I took an interest in becoming one of the volunteer English teachers of the five. Now Im writing here to,apply for,this opportunity.,I, Li Hua, a girl of 17, have been,tutor,ing two primary school kids in English for two years,with a good command of English.,Presently, I,work as,a,member,of loving Heart Club in our school,which,has helped me,build up confidence,and good,communication skills,. In my opinion, being a volunteer teacher at the SOS village is obviously more than just teaching and further more,it is helpful to,broaden our horizon,and improve our understanding of the world,. Thats why Id like very much to,take this opportunity,and,make the most of,my special talents and interests. By helping those kids, I feel I can,make a big difference to,their future and,make a small contribution to society,.,写作“三步走”：,说明投诉问题描述具体情况期待解决方案,投诉信,1.投诉内容。一般放在信的开头。常用的表达法有：,I am writing to make a complaint about,我写信是为了投诉,I would like to draw your attention to the problemfault 我想让您知道这个问题错误,I am writing to inform you that I findunsatisfactory.,我写信是为了告诉你，我发现令人非常不满意。,I wish to express my dissatisfactiondisappointment about,我想表达我对的不满失望,I am writing to complain about . I received bought ordered,2.投诉原因。一般讲述对商品质量或售后服务不满意的地方。常用的表达法有：,When we checkedexamined closely., we noticed found ,When I took. out of the bag and examined. closely, I found.,When I unpacked. and tried to use it, it did not work.,One annoying aspect of your service is 你们的服务项目中一个令人不满的地方是,3.希望得到的结果。常用的表达法有：,(1) Please let me know what you intend to do in this matter.,(2) I am returning. and look forward to receiving a full refund of.,(3) In view of the inconvenience that this has caused, I feel you should.,(4) Would you please let me know whether or not you canas soon as possible? 你们是否可以告知我能不能尽快,（5）It would be highly appreciated if you could 如果你能我将万分感谢。,（6）I trust you will take my complaints seriously and 我相信你会认真对待我的投诉，并且,（7）I hope that my problem will get your kind consideration。我希望您能考虑一下我的问题。,（8）l hope you can make an investigation into this matter as soon as possible.我希望你们能尽快调查此事。,（9）I hope I can,get my refund,as soon as possible.我希望能尽快收到退款。,（10）If it is not properly settled，I would ask you to,give my money back, or I would complain to the concerned authorities. 如果此事不能妥善解决，我将要求退还支付款项，或者向有关部门投诉。,假设你是Sam, 现向报社投诉日前的一桩消费问题，请按照写作内容给编辑写一封投诉信。,【写作内容】,(1) 上周末在家附近的书店买了一本,英汉词典,；,(2) 回家后仔细一看，发现有几页,破裂,，且到处是印刷错误，严重影响阅读,(3) 回书店要求,更换,；店员无理地拒绝请求，并否认字典的质量问题；,(4) 恳切希望报纸呼吁服务行业改进服务质量,Dear Editor,I am writing this letter to reflect some problems I came across recently and appeal to the improvement of the service industry.,Last week,end,I,bought,an English-Chinese,dictionary in a bookstore near my home.,But,when I went home and read carefully, I found that the several,pages,of the dictionary,have been cracked,and the misprints,spread,everywhere in the dictionary, seriously,affecting,my comprehension.,So,I went to the bookstore to,require for,a replacement.,But,to my surprise, the staff of the bookstore turned down my,request,rudely and even den,ied,the poor quality of the dictionary.,As a result, I expect your newspaper to,appeal to,the service industry,to,attach more importance to the service improvement.,Thank you for your attention.,Sincerely yours,Sam,Dear Mr. Principal,Im a senior student of our school. Id like to say something about the canteen service in our school.,In general, we,are satisfied with,the clean and tidy dinning hall, its delicious food and the good service. However,what is not to our satisfaction is that,the price of the meal is a little too high. Also we can only,have a limited variety of dishes to choose from,. In addition, we often have to stand in line for a long time before we can,get the meal,. Therefore, may I suggest that the problem,be solved,as soon as possible so that we can all enjoy our meals at school?,Thanks for your consideration.,Sincerely yours,Li Hua,反映问题信,八、通知（Notice),称呼，,开头语,通知正文,结束语,口头通知,书面通知,NOTICE,通知正文,日期,通知单位,书 面 通 知常用结构 ：,1 地点的表示方法,in Room 8 ,in the meeting room,in the stadium,in the teachers office,in the lab,at the Friendship Theater,at the school gate,on the farm, on the second floor,on the playground,2 时间的表示方法(钟点星期年月日),in,June, 2009,on,June 21, 2009,on,Thursday, June 21, 2009,at,7:00 pm,on,June 21,2009,at,7:00,on,the evening,of,June 21,2009,at,7:00 pm,on,Thursday, June 21, 2009,at,7:00,on,Thursday evening, June 21, 2009,from,2:00 pm,to,4:30 pm,on,Thursday, June 21, 2009,4. 注意事项的表达：,are required to,are expected to, are supposed to,should,.are to do.,学生会要组织一次讲座。假如你是学生会干部，请你用英语写一则书面通知，内容如下：,1、讲座题目：学习英语的重要性,2、演讲者：北京大学怀特教授,3、讲座时间：9月27日，星期五下午2：30-4：30,4、地点：学校体育馆,5、注意事项：1）全体学生准时参加,2）散会后回教室就报告内容开展,讨论，并制定出各自的英语学习,计划。,NOTICE,There,will be,an,English lecture,on,the importance of English learning,by,Professor White,from,Beijing University. It will be,given,in,the stadium gym,from,2:30,to,4:30,on,Friday afternoon, February 27. All the students are expected to attend it on time. After the lecture, please go back to our classrooms and have a discussion,on,the report. Every student is required to make a plan,for,learning English.,为了使大家能放松心情，你班拟组织一次短途旅行。假设你是班长李华，请用英语草拟一份口头通知，告知同学具体安排。,【写作内容】,时 间：10月1日7日,旅游地点：韶关,承办者：中国青年旅游社（The China Youth Travel Agency）,活动内容：登山、漂流、海上垂钓、温泉浴,费 用：1000元/ 每人，含往返车票、食宿费及意外保险,注意事项：1.带雨具、运动鞋；,2.带上手机和充电器；,3.10月1日上午8:30在学校门口集中出发；,4.愿意参加者请于9月20日前在班长处登记报名。,Dear classmates,May I have your attention please?,From October 1st to 7th , we plan to organize a trip to Shaoguan to relax ourselves. The China Youth Travel Agency will be in charge of all the activities, such as mountain climbing, water-flowing, sea-fishing and hot spring bath and,the total cost for the trip,is 1000 yuan per person, which includes the fees for round tickets, food, accommodation and the i