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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,2022,届,全国新,高考,英语备考,复习,读后续写动作描写画面化,Continuation writing,How to make your action,descriptions,vivid,?,By the end of the class,students are able to,1)vivify the actions by,using specific verbs,and,coherent actions,(,动作链,),2)apply the,adverbs and prepositional phrases,to modify(,修饰,)the verbs.,3)choose,suitable grammar,(,非谓语、独立主格、定语从句、形容词作状语,),to enrich the scene.,The two dogs,circled,each other and,looked for,the right moment to,attack,.,Tip 1:specific verbs,Tip 2:coherent actions,Word Bank,mouth,foot,hand/arm,hit,beat,tap,pat/drag,draw,pull/catch,grab,grasp,seize/cast,throw/lift,raise,carry,take/hug,embrace/,reach(out)/,shout cry yell,scream,/,smile,laugh,/,whisper,murmur/,sob,/howl,emphasize,stress,/,tell,/,add,/,explain,/,admit,/,reply=respond,/,praise,/,complain,/comfort,rush dash/make ones way to/wander/travel march/stagger(,蹒跚,),jump/spring to ones feet/stand still/trip(,绊倒,)/drag/,crawl,Scene 1,跳水救人,(A coward),Henry,jumped into,the river and,saved,R,obert.,_ the screams,Henry_the riverside,_,his clothes and,_,the water without hesitation.He _ Robert just as he was sinking the last time.By great effort,and with much danger to himself,he,_,Robert to the shore.,Hearing,ran/dashed/rushed to,threw off,jumped into,reached,brought/dragged,Scene,2 荒野求救 (2016.10 浙江卷),During an adventure,Jane quarreled with her husband Tom and got lost in the forest.Then,she,tried her best to attract the attention of the helicopter.Finally,she was saved and reunited with Tom.,A few minutes later,another helicopter flew overhead.,Jane,took off her yellow blouse,thinking that she should go to an open area and,flag,them if they came back again.,Suddenly,A moving dot(,点,)on the horizon,was spotted.,1.What would Jane do?,2.What would happen?,list the actions and tell the rest story.,Suddenly,A moving dot(,点,)on the horizon,was spotted.,As it drew nearer,Jane,saw it clearly,.The helicopter,Jane,murmured,sprang up and dashed to,the center of an open area.She,waved her yellow blouse desperately,to it and,yelled at the helicopter with full-strength.,To her great joy,this time she was spotted.Soon afterwards,the helicopter landed steadily on the ground and Tom jumped out.The moment Toms eyes fell upon her,Jane,threw herself into his arms.,Honey,Never will I leave you again.Jane,sobbed,in tears,.The reunited couple,hugged each other tightly.,Tip 3:,in+n.,：in terror/excitement/shock/sorrow/in a low(weak/sweet)voice,with+,情感名词,：with delight/pleasure/excitement/satisfaction/anger/fear,with+,身体部位,：,with its sharp eyes/her shaky hand/her pale lips,adverbs:,tightly/cheerfully/hopefully/helplessly/desperately/fiercely(fight)violently/swiftly,Suddenly,A moving dot(,点,)on the horizon,was spotted.,E,xha,u,st,ed but,hopeful,Jane jumped to her feet to catch a clear sight of it.,The helicopter,Jane,murmured,sprang up and dashed to,the center of an open area,waving,her yellow blouse desperately and,yelling,at the helicopter with excitement.,This time she,was spotted,which made her feel more delighted.Eyes brimming with tears,Jane,jumped off the rock and rushed towards,Tom like a flying a,rrow,hugging tightly in his arms,“please never leave me alone!,Tip 4:Choose suitable grammar,形容词作状语(修饰句子主语),分词作状语（注意分词与逻辑主语的关系）,定语从句,独立主格（名词/代词+doing/done/to do/n./adj./adv./介词短语）,The car abruptly stopped in front of him.,Paul,put down,the window and,said,“Come on,get in the car.”,Then,Mac jumped off the bicycle and,got into,the car.“What a narrow escape!”Mac,added,.The wolf walked around the car,but just in vain.,Finally,Mac was safe and expressed his gratitude to Paul.,Scene,3,骑行遇狼逃生(2018.06 浙江卷)）,Mac,was cycling,from his home to Alaska with his friends.His friends had to stop to make a bicycle repair,so he pedaled(骑行)along alone.,Suddenly,a wolf appeared,catching up with him.,At this moment,Paul and Beeky,were driving their car on their way to Alaska and saw the scene.,1.Rewrite this paragraph by using what you have learned.,(specific verbs coherent actions suitable grammar),The car abruptly stopped in front of him.,Paul,rolled down,the window and,yelled,“Come on,get in the car.”,Frightened,Mac,jumped off,the bicycle and,dashed into,the back seat of the car.“What a narrow escape!”Mac,sighed in a shaky voice.,The wolf walked around the car and,howled at them,fiercely,but just in vain.,Realizing the wolf couldnt catch up any more,Mac,sighed with relief,and,sank down to,the back seat.Paul handed him a bottle of water and he managed a weak smile,murmuring something,like“Thank you very much”.,Tip 4:More doesnt mean better.,Scene 4,火海救人,Tara,an 8-year-old girl,was stuck in the firing house.,Surrel,her neighbor who was 64 years old,went into,smoke-filled house searching but in vain,.H,e ran outside to catch his breath.Where is Tiara?he asked,desperately,.,“The second floor.her aunt,shouted back,.,1.,Taking a deep breath,he went in a second time._,The darkness was,overwhelming.,Running blindly,he,finally,made it to,the second floor,where
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