初中英语作文的修改

,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,初中英语作文的修改,名词的单复数问题：,1.Joy found there was,much fish,in the lake.,2.The water was so clear that they could see all kinds of,fish,.,3.Many,place,are very dry.,Joy found there,were many fish,in the lake.,The water was so clear that they could see all kinds of,fishes,.,Many,places,are very dry.,主谓一致问题,1.,And now many rivers,becomes,very dirty.,2.,Everything,are,going very well.,3.,David with his little brother,go,to the park every Sunday.,4.,There,are,a man teacher and two women teachers in the office.,And now many rivers,become,very dirty.,Everything,is,going very well.,David with his little brother,goes,to the park every Sunday,There,is,a man teacher and two women teachers in the office.,时态和语态问题,1.,Her mother jumped into the lake and,swimed,to Joy.At last her mother saved Joy.They were all got wet.,2.,Toms mother jumped into the water.She saves her daughter at last.,3.,On Tree Planting Day,many trees planted in,Yongan,Park.,Her mother jumped into the lake and,swam,to Joy.At last her mother saved Joy.They all,got,wet.,On Tree Planting Day,many trees,were planted,in,Yongan,Park.,Toms mother jumped into the water.She,saved,her daughter at last.,4.,The 29,th,Olympic Games will hold in China.,The 29,th,Olympic Games,will be held,in China.,Chinglish,现象,1.Last Sunday,Ann with her mother and brother went to a park.The park with,a lake.,2.I and my classmates by bus to,Dayang,Foreign Language School.,Last Sunday,Ann went to a park with her mother,and brother.,There was,a lake in the park.,My classmates and I took a bus,to,Dayang,Foreign Language School.,行文的逻辑性问题,1.At once,she jumped into the water to save her daughter,with her mothers help,.,2.But she wasnt careful,so that,she fell into the river.,At once,she jumped into the water to save her daughter,.,She wasnt careful,and,she fell into the river.,词类错用,1.When I was sadly,I played with it.When I was happily,I played with it.,2.All of us are excited in it.Because it can make we happy and healthy.,When I was,sad,I played with it.,When I was,happy,I played with it.,All of us are excited,about,it.Because it can make,us,happy and healthy.,典型病例,名词的单复数问题,主谓一致问题,时态和语态问题,Chinglish,现象,行文的逻辑性问题,词类错用,请你当老师,书面表达,自行车在北京仍然受欢迎，骑车上学或上班都很方便。如今越来越多的人,这使得,。骑车既可以,，又可以,。那么你更喜欢哪种交通工具呢？为什么？,请你当老师,Bicycle are still popular on the streets in Beijing.Its easy to by bike go to school or go to work.Now more and more people plan to buy cars instead of bike.But I think that running cars make air dirty.It was harmful to our health.Riding bicycles can help people keep healthy,and energy can be save.Because riding bikes will always make me happy,so I prefer to go to school by bike.,Please read it carefully,then find the mistakes and correct them.,Bicycle,s,are still popular on the streets in Beijing.Its easy to go to school or go to work,by bike,.Now more and more people plan to buy cars instead of bike,s,.But I think that running cars make,s,air dirty.It,is,harmful to our health.Riding bicycles can help people keep healthy,and energy can be save,d,.Because riding bikes will always make me happy,I prefer to go to school by bike.,句子开头要大写，每句之后有标点；,前句句末用逗号，后句开头用小写；,前句句末用句号，后句开头要大写；,记住书写须清楚，因为里面有分数；,先草稿，后定稿，书写歌谣记牢靠,。,书写歌,Homework,Write a composition,：,A letter to,Mrs,Zhang,今天，二中的张老师给你们上了一堂英语作文课，她和你们一起讨论,发现错误并修改错误，教给你们写好作文的技巧,(Writing technique),，,她的课对你们写作能力的提高很有帮助。请你给她写一封感谢信。,