中考写作训练Adescriptiongofaplace课件(共31张)

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Writing,A description of a place,WritingA description of a pla,1,Do you like travelling?,Do you like travelling?,2,There is a mystery envelope on your desks.,There are 3 air tickets in it.,Follow me! Lets start our wonderful journey!,There is a mystery envelope on,3,It is,one of the,largest,countries,in the world.,It,lies on,the south coast of the Pacific.,Sydney is the biggest city of it.,It,is famous for,Koala and Kangaroo.,Guess!,It is one of the largest count,4,Sydney Opera House,悉尼歌剧院,Sydney Harbor Bridge,悉尼大桥,Sydney University,悉尼大学,Australia,Sydney Opera House 悉尼歌剧院Sydney,5,Kangaroo,Koala,Gold coast,KangarooKoalaGold coast,6,The first ticket,Australia,The first ticketAustralia,7,Australia is one of the largest countries in the world. It lies on the south coast of the Pacific. It has an area of 7.6 million square kilometers. It has a population of 10 million.,Sydney is the biggest city in Australia. You can find many places of interest there such as the Sydney Harbor Bridge, Sydney Opera House. Australia is famous for Koala and Kangaroo. And it is also famous for its beautiful beaches. If you like the sunshine and playing by the sea, it is a perfect place to go.,Australia has something for everyone, so why not visit Australia this year?,Australia is one of the lar,8,Facts,Interesting/,special,things,Location,Area,Population,Australia is one of the largest countries in the world. It lies on the south coast of the Pacific. It has an area of 7.6 million square kilometers. It has a population of 10 million.,Sydney is the biggest city in Australia. You can find many places of interest there such as the Sydney Harbour Bridge, Sydney Opera House. Australia is famous for Koala and Kangaroo. And it is also famous for its beautiful beaches. If you like the sunshine and playing by the sea, it is a perfect place to go.,Australia has something for everyone, so why not visit Australia this year?,Task 1 : Structure & Content,Opinions /,feelings,FactsInteresting/Location Au,9,China,Wherever we go, we will manage to go back home!,The second ticket,ChinaWherever we go, we will m,10,Could you tell me some places of interest (,名胜,) in China?,Could you tell me some places,11,China is a large country with five thousand years history. It stands in Asia and lies on the west coast of the ocean. It covers an area of 9,600,000square kilometers. It has a population of 1.3 billion.,There are many places of interest in China, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and so on. Hainan and Guangdong by the sea are the perfect places for a summer holiday, but if you like to visit China in winter, you can try skiing on the mountains in Haerbin.,China has something for everyone. I love my country! Welcome to China!,Facts,Interesting,special,things,Opinions /,feelings,Location,Area,Population,Task 2 : Language,China is a large country wi,12,China is a large country with five thousand years history. It stands in Asia and lies on the west coast of the ocean. It covers an area of 9,600,000square kilometers. It has a population of 1.3 billion.,Facts,Population,Area,Location,China is a large country wi,13,There are many places of interest in China, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and so on. Hainan and Guangdong by the sea are the perfect places for a summer holiday, but if you like to visit China in winter, you can try skiing on the mountains in Haerbin,Interesting/special things,Places of interest,Special,things,There are many places of inter,14,China has something for everyone.,I love my country!,Welcome to China!,This holiday, why not come to China!,.,Opinions / feelings,China has something for everyo,15,China is a large country with,five thousand years,history,.,It stands in,Asia and,lies on,the west coast of the ocean.,It covers an area of,9,600,000square kilometers.,It has a population of,1.3 billion.,There are many places of interest,in China,such as,the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and so on. Hainan and Guangdong by the sea,are the perfect place for,a summer holiday,but if you like to,visit China in winter,you can,try skiing on the mountains in Haerbin.,China has something for everyone. I love my country! Welcome to China!,China is a large country wi,16,The third ticket,Guangzhou,The third ticketGuangzhou,17,Guangzhou,Guangzhou,18,中考写作训练A-descriptiong-of-a-place-课件(共31张),19,Statue of the Five Goats,五羊雕塑,Guangzhou Tower,广州塔,Chang long tourist resort,长隆旅游度假区,Haixinsha Park,海心沙公园,Statue of the Five Goats 五羊雕塑G,20,F,A,C,T,S,Location,North of China, the capital of Guangdong,Name,Ram City (,羊城,),Population,About 130 million,Area,7,400 square kilometers,Interesting / special things,Guangzhou Tower,，,Statue of the Five Goats,，,Chang long tourist resort,delicious food,The 16th Asian Games in 2010(,第,16,届亚运会,),Opinions / Feelings,?,Welcome to Guangzhou!,Task 3 : Speaking,In pairs,FLocation North of China, the,21,Guangzhou,is the capital city,of Guangdong Province. It is called “Ram City”. It,lies in,the south of China.,It has an area of,about 7,400 square kilometers.,It has a population of,over 130 million.,There are many places of interest in,Guangzhou,such as,Guangzhou Tower, Statue of the Five Goats, Chang long tourist resort,and so on,. Guangzhou,is also famous for,its delicious food and you can find many kinds of food there.,The 16th Asian Games,was held in,Guangzhou in 2010. And it was,so,excellent,that,many tourists went to Guangzhou to have a visit.,Guangzhou has something for everyone.,This winter holiday, why not come to Guangzhou!,Facts,Interesting/,special,things,Opinions /,feelings,Guangzhou is the capital,22,Speaking,Structure,Language,How to,describe,a place?,Guangzhou,SpeakingStructureLanguageHow t,23,Facts,Interesting/,special,things,Opinions,feelings,Location,Area,Population,is a large country with.history. /one of the most.in the world.,stands in and lies in theof,It has/covers an area of square kilometers.,It has a population of.,There are many places of interest in, such as.,If you prefer to, you can,is famous for,I hope I can visitone day.,Why not visit.this year?,How many parts?,What are they?,FactsInteresting/OpinionsLocat,24,Welcome to Dalian,Task 4 : Writing,Welcome to DalianTask 4 : Writ,25,Xinghai Square,Laohutan Ocean Park,Jinshitan Tourism,Vacation Zone,Xinghai SquareLaohutan Ocean P,26,地理位置,中国东北部,别名,北方明珠,(North Pearl),人口,近,600,万,面积,12,574,平方公里,名胜,星海广场；老虎滩海洋公园；金石滩国家旅游度假区,节日,中国国际啤酒节：每年,7,月底举行,吸引着世界各地的人们,你对自己家乡的感受和期盼？,Writing,请根据以下内容，向今天新的英语老师,Connie,介绍你的家乡,-,大连。,Would you please tell more,about your hometown?,地理位置中国东北部别名北方明珠(North Pearl)人口,27,Scoring criteria,评分标准,一个好的方面：,_,一个有待改善的方面：,_,项目,本次互改重点,分值,20,分,得分,内容,8,分,要点,1-4,每点,0.5,分,4,分,要点,5,、,6,每点,1.5,分,4,分,结构,3,分,分段写,1.5,分,结尾段,1.5,分,语言,7,分,时态：一般现在时,2,分,拼写、语法,5,分,书写,2,分,书写认真、卷面整洁,2,分,评改人：,作文总分：,Task 5: Scoring,opinions/,feelings,Scoring criteria 评分标准一个好的方面：_,28,Summary:,Main points,Language,Facts：,Location,Population,Area,is a large country with.history. /one of the most.in the world.,stands in and lies in theof,It has/covers an area of square kilometers.,It has a population of.,Special or,Interesting things,There are many places of interest in, such as.,If you prefer to, you can,is famous for,Opinions or feelings,I hope I can visitone day.,Why not visit.this year?,Scoring criteria,评分标准,Summary:Main pointsLanguageFac,29,Ask one of your classmates to make comments on your compositions according to the scoring criteria.,Polish the composition according to his/her idea and what you have learned today.,Homework,Ask one of your classmates to,30,Thank you!,Thank you!,31,1.,学习语文是一种享受，你会发现语文学习是在与另一个人对话，也是在与自己对话。每当你读一篇文章时，仿佛作者就在你身边，他的经历、他的情感都进入了你心中。,2.,不论读名家名篇，还是自己创作，你会更清楚地认识到自己，每次学习语文，其实都是对自己的一次审视，你不仅仅懂的更多，而且文学素养也随之提高。这便是语文，需要你与之心灵相通。,3.,动物也有着自己的语言。它们不光有声音语言，还有许多无声的语言，例如美妙的舞姿、绚丽的色彩和芬芳的气味，研究这些千奇百怪的语言对人类有特殊的意义。,4.,议论文写作中大部分同学会陷入泛泛而谈，没有议论的内容，就算有论据可用，也只是蜻蜓点水，草草收兵。不少作文且不说能运用几种修辞组织语言，更不说能使句子富有意蕴，单是连最基本的语言通顺也很难做到。,5.,记叙文的写作反映的问题则更大，且不说选材的平淡，就语言的叙述而言，无法体现出一个学生高中三年这一思想蜕变的进步，反而还停留在初中的水平，令人汗颜。,6.,大部分的记叙文平铺直叙，语言啰嗦乏味，缺少灵动性的语句，不会运用各种表达方式，逻辑错乱，这样的文章基本都被判为四类下。,7.,由果溯因法。事物都是互相联系的。比如，有很多事物就是以因果关系的联系形式存在的。写材料作文，审题时如果能由材料中列举的现象或结果推究出造成所列现象或结果的本质原因，往往能找到最佳的立意。,8.,提炼中心法。这是写新材料作文最为常见且最为稳妥的审题立意方法。写新材料作文时，如果能准确地提炼出材料的中心，并以其作为文章的主旨，一定会使所写文章既切题又有深度。所以，写新材料作文时这种方法来立意最多。,9.,抓关键句法。关键句常常有暗示材料中心的作用。所以，有些新材料作文材料中的关键性语句可以作为选择立意角度的突破口。在新材料作文的材料中，关键句常常是命题者或材料中的人物的评议性语句。,感谢观看，欢迎指导！,1.学习语文是一种享受，你会发现语文学习是在与另一个人对话，,32,Writing,A description of a place,WritingA description of a pla,33,Do you like travelling?,Do you like travelling?,34,There is a mystery envelope on your desks.,There are 3 air tickets in it.,Follow me! Lets start our wonderful journey!,There is a mystery envelope on,35,It is,one of the,largest,countries,in the world.,It,lies on,the south coast of the Pacific.,Sydney is the biggest city of it.,It,is famous for,Koala and Kangaroo.,Guess!,It is one of the largest count,36,Sydney Opera House,悉尼歌剧院,Sydney Harbor Bridge,悉尼大桥,Sydney University,悉尼大学,Australia,Sydney Opera House 悉尼歌剧院Sydney,37,Kangaroo,Koala,Gold coast,KangarooKoalaGold coast,38,The first ticket,Australia,The first ticketAustralia,39,Australia is one of the largest countries in the world. It lies on the south coast of the Pacific. It has an area of 7.6 million square kilometers. It has a population of 10 million.,Sydney is the biggest city in Australia. You can find many places of interest there such as the Sydney Harbor Bridge, Sydney Opera House. Australia is famous for Koala and Kangaroo. And it is also famous for its beautiful beaches. If you like the sunshine and playing by the sea, it is a perfect place to go.,Australia has something for everyone, so why not visit Australia this year?,Australia is one of the lar,40,Facts,Interesting/,special,things,Location,Area,Population,Australia is one of the largest countries in the world. It lies on the south coast of the Pacific. It has an area of 7.6 million square kilometers. It has a population of 10 million.,Sydney is the biggest city in Australia. You can find many places of interest there such as the Sydney Harbour Bridge, Sydney Opera House. Australia is famous for Koala and Kangaroo. And it is also famous for its beautiful beaches. If you like the sunshine and playing by the sea, it is a perfect place to go.,Australia has something for everyone, so why not visit Australia this year?,Task 1 : Structure & Content,Opinions /,feelings,FactsInteresting/Location Au,41,China,Wherever we go, we will manage to go back home!,The second ticket,ChinaWherever we go, we will m,42,Could you tell me some places of interest (,名胜,) in China?,Could you tell me some places,43,China is a large country with five thousand years history. It stands in Asia and lies on the west coast of the ocean. It covers an area of 9,600,000square kilometers. It has a population of 1.3 billion.,There are many places of interest in China, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and so on. Hainan and Guangdong by the sea are the perfect places for a summer holiday, but if you like to visit China in winter, you can try skiing on the mountains in Haerbin.,China has something for everyone. I love my country! Welcome to China!,Facts,Interesting,special,things,Opinions /,feelings,Location,Area,Population,Task 2 : Language,China is a large country wi,44,China is a large country with five thousand years history. It stands in Asia and lies on the west coast of the ocean. It covers an area of 9,600,000square kilometers. It has a population of 1.3 billion.,Facts,Population,Area,Location,China is a large country wi,45,There are many places of interest in China, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and so on. Hainan and Guangdong by the sea are the perfect places for a summer holiday, but if you like to visit China in winter, you can try skiing on the mountains in Haerbin,Interesting/special things,Places of interest,Special,things,There are many places of inter,46,China has something for everyone.,I love my country!,Welcome to China!,This holiday, why not come to China!,.,Opinions / feelings,China has something for everyo,47,China is a large country with,five thousand years,history,.,It stands in,Asia and,lies on,the west coast of the ocean.,It covers an area of,9,600,000square kilometers.,It has a population of,1.3 billion.,There are many places of interest,in China,such as,the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and so on. Hainan and Guangdong by the sea,are the perfect place for,a summer holiday,but if you like to,visit China in winter,you can,try skiing on the mountains in Haerbin.,China has something for everyone. I love my country! Welcome to China!,China is a large country wi,48,The third ticket,Guangzhou,The third ticketGuangzhou,49,Guangzhou,Guangzhou,50,中考写作训练A-descriptiong-of-a-place-课件(共31张),51,Statue of the Five Goats,五羊雕塑,Guangzhou Tower,广州塔,Chang long tourist resort,长隆旅游度假区,Haixinsha Park,海心沙公园,Statue of the Five Goats 五羊雕塑G,52,F,A,C,T,S,Location,North of China, the capital of Guangdong,Name,Ram City (,羊城,),Population,About 130 million,Area,7,400 square kilometers,Interesting / special things,Guangzhou Tower,，,Statue of the Five Goats,，,Chang long tourist resort,delicious food,The 16th Asian Games in 2010(,第,16,届亚运会,),Opinions / Feelings,?,Welcome to Guangzhou!,Task 3 : Speaking,In pairs,FLocation North of China, the,53,Guangzhou,is the capital city,of Guangdong Province. It is called “Ram City”. It,lies in,the south of China.,It has an area of,about 7,400 square kilometers.,It has a population of,over 130 million.,There are many places of interest in,Guangzhou,such as,Guangzhou Tower, Statue of the Five Goats, Chang long tourist resort,and so on,. Guangzhou,is also famous for,its delicious food and you can find many kinds of food there.,The 16th Asian Games,was held in,Guangzhou in 2010. And it was,so,excellent,that,many tourists went to Guangzhou to have a visit.,Guangzhou has something for everyone.,This winter holiday, why not come to Guangzhou!,Facts,Interesting/,special,things,Opinions /,feelings,Guangzhou is the capital,54,Speaking,Structure,Language,How to,describe,a place?,Guangzhou,SpeakingStructureLanguageHow t,55,Facts,Interesting/,special,things,Opinions,feelings,Location,Area,Population,is a large country with.history. /one of the most.in the world.,stands in and lies in theof,It has/covers an area of square kilometers.,It has a population of.,There are many places of interest in, such as.,If you prefer to, you can,is famous for,I hope I can visitone day.,Why not visit.this year?,How many parts?,What are they?,FactsInteresting/OpinionsLocat,56,Welcome to Dalian,Task 4 : Writing,Welcome to DalianTask 4 : Writ,57,Xinghai Square,Laohutan Ocean Park,Jinshitan Tourism,Vacation Zone,Xinghai SquareLaohutan Ocean P,58,地理位置,中国东北部,别名,北方明珠,(North Pearl),人口,近,600,万,面积,12,574,平方公里,名胜,星海广场；老虎滩海洋公园；金石滩国家旅游度假区,节日,中国国际啤酒节：每年,7,月底举行,吸引着世界各地的人们,你对自己家乡的感受和期盼？,Writing,请根据以下内容，向今天新的英语老师,Connie,介绍你的家乡,-,大连。,Would you please tell more,about your hometown?,地理位置中国东北部别名北方明珠(North Pearl)人口,59,Scoring criteria,评分标准,一个好的方面：,_,一个有待改善的方面：,_,项目,本次互改重点,分值,20,分,得分,内容,8,分,要点,1-4,每点,0.5,分,4,分,要点,5,、,6,每点,1.5,分,4,分,结构,3,分,分段写,1.5,分,结尾段,1.5,分,语言,7,分,时态：一般现在时,2,分,拼写、语法,5,分,书写,2,分,书写认真、卷面整洁,2,分,评改人：,作文总分：,Task 5: Scoring,opinions/,feelings,Scoring criteria 评分标准一个好的方面：_,60,Summary:,Main points,Language,Facts：,Location,Population,Area,is a large country with.history. /one of the most.in the world.,stands in and lies in theof,It has/covers an area of square kilometers.,It has a population of.,Special or,Interesting things,There are many places of interest in, such as.,If you prefer to, you can,is famous for,Opinions or feelings,I hope I can visitone day.,Why not visit.this year?,Scoring criteria,评分标准,Summary:Main pointsLanguageFac,61,Ask one of your classmates to make comments on your compositions according to the scoring criteria.,Polish the composition according to his/her idea and what you have learned today.,Homework,Ask one of your classmates to,62,Thank you!,Thank you!,63,1.,学习语文是一种享受，你会发现语文学习是在与另一个人对话，也是在与自己对话。每当你读一篇文章时，仿佛作者就在你身边，他的经历、他的情感都进入了你心中。,2.,不论读名家名篇，还是自己创作，你会更清楚地认识到自己，每次学习语文，其实都是对自己的一次审视，你不仅仅懂的更多，而且文学素养也随之提高。这便是语文，需要你与之心灵相通。,3.,动物也有着自己的语言。它们不光有声音语言，还有许多无声的语言，例如美妙的舞姿、绚丽的色彩和芬芳的气味，研究这些千奇百怪的语言对人类有特殊的意义。,4.,议论文写作中大部分同学会陷入泛泛而谈，没有议论的内容，就算有论据可用，也只是蜻蜓点水，草草收兵。不少作文且不说能运用几种修辞组织语言，更不说能使句子富有意蕴，单是连最基本的语言通顺也很难做到。,5.,记叙文的写作反映的问题则更大，且不说选材的平淡，就语言的叙述而言，无法体现出一个学生高中三年这一思想蜕变的进步，反而还停留在初中的水平，令人汗颜。,6.,大部分的记叙文平铺直叙，语言啰嗦乏味，缺少灵动性的语句，不会运用各种表达方式，逻辑错乱，这样的文章基本都被判为四类下。,7.,由果溯因法。事物都是互相联系的。比如，有很多事物就是以因果关系的联系形式存在的。写材料作文，审题时如果能由材料中列举的现象或结果推究出造成所列现象或结果的本质原因，往往能找到最佳的立意。,8.,提炼中心法。这是写新材料作文最为常见且最为稳妥的审题立意方法。写新材料作文时，如果能准确地提炼出材料的中心，并以其作为文章的主旨，一定会使所写文章既切题又有深度。所以，写新材料作文时这种方法来立意最多。,9.,抓关键句法。关键句常常有暗示材料中心的作用。所以，有些新材料作文材料中的关键性语句可以作为选择立意角度的突破口。在新材料作文的材料中，关键句常常是命题者或材料中的人物的评议性语句。,感谢观看，欢迎指导！,1.学习语文是一种享受，你会发现语文学习是在与另一个人对话，,64,