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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Task Writing,-,How to develop a paragraph in an exposition or argumentation?,Learning aims,1),2),学生的压力来源,Sample 1,Maybe someone will ask why the students should relax. As a student, we must do the homework everyday, and deal with schoolwork. For example, Whats more, we feel lots of pressure from studies.,是否该建此墙,Sample 2,Some students think the stress wall should be built, because they have stress. They may feel pressure from parents, teachers and even themselves.I agree to build the stress wall. Students can relax themselves and take away stress in this way.,Sample 3,Obviously, the wall should be built. It can not onlybut also. However, problem cant be solved in such a simple way.,理想的大学生活。（,2008,广东高考）,Sample 4,After finishing my high school life, I am preparing myself for college life. I am so excited and I also looking forward to the college life. So I imagine much about it. The college life will be wonderful and free.,Skills,：,Put it at the very beginning.,State,directly and,clearly,what youre going to write.,a.,学生的压力来源,(,梁清华,)Its obvious that most of students feel a lot of pressure from study or other reasons.,/Nowadays, students are under great pressure, which mainly comes from their school work as well as peers relationship.,How to write a topic sentence?,b.,是否该建此墙？,(,欧阳泳仪,) As I see it, the stress wall should be built for the following reasons.,C.,理想的大学生活（,2008,广东高考）,I hope to have a happy and colorful life in the college.,1,）直接回答要点,Practice,1).,你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法,（,2010,广东高考）,2).,你赞同熬夜的做法吗？请简述原因。,1).,你对用金钱鼓励孩子学校的看法,（,2010,广东高考）,When it comes to,the way to encourage children to study by giving money, I,dont agree with,it.,2),你赞同熬夜的做法吗？请简述原因。,(,为什么,),I,dont support,staying up late,for the following reasons.,I,am strongly against,staying up late,because,it does great,harm,to our health.,At present,its,a universal phenomenon that,many students stay up late at night,.,My attitude,toward this,is negative,and,the reasons for,this are not far to seek.,2,）重述要点,a.,学生压力的来源,(,刘婉钗,)Nowadays, many students are living under stress.,b.,其它减压方法,(,郑碧君,) Besides, there are many other ways to release our stress.,c.,中学生活与大学生活的差别（,2008,广东高考）,（何婷婷）,In my opinion, college life will be quite different from that in high school.,How to write a topic sentence?,Practice,1).,请谈谈电子书,(E-book),的普及带来的利与弊,2).,谈谈独立的重要性。,3).,我们该如何践行低碳生活？,1),请谈谈电子书,(E-book),的普及带来的利与弊。,E-books have,both,advantages,and,disadvantages.,E-books have,more,advantages,than,disadvantages.,I think the advantages of E-books,outweigh,their disadvantages.,Although E-books have many advantages, they are,not without,（不无）,their disadvantages.,2).,谈谈独立的重要性。,(Inspired by the story,) I suddenly,realized the importance of,independence.,/Nobody will deny that independence,plays a very important part in,our life.,3).,我们该如何践行低碳生活？,As a student, we can do,many things,in our campus to live a low-carbon life.,/In order to live a low-carbon life,some measures,should be taken.,What should we do to live a low- carbon life as students? I think the,answers are as follows,.,(,说明必要、重要或意义,),(,怎么做,),Write out the following sentences (as many as you can),Topic sentences to show necessity/importance/significance,Topic sentences to show what to do,Topic sentences to show reasons,Topic sentences to show necessity/importance/significance,：,Sth,.,is necessary/important /significant, to sb.,It is,. necessary/important / significant/,for sb. to do,sth,.,Sth,.,plays a very important part/role in,The,significance of, cannot be overvalued.,Some topic sentences to show what to do,We should,take effective measures to,Some measures must be taken,to prevent,this from happening.,Its time for,the government,to do something to,improve the condition.,We can solve the problem,by the following methods,.,.,Some topic sentences to show reasons,There are,many reasons for,this.,We,have,good reasons to believe that,The,reasons why, are not far to seek.,.,because,the advantages are enormous for everyone concerned.,Many reasons account for,How to write supporting sentences,1),解释原因,是否该建此墙？,In my opinion, the practice of building a stress wall, which the students can hit, is not appropriate.,This may lead students to solve a problem with violence or develop a bad temper.,2),逐条列举,你认为建设绿色校园应该采取哪些措施,?,(,主题,)In order to build a green campus, effective measures should be taken. (,列举,),For one thing, the school should make rules and regulations to prevent students doing harm to our green campus.,For another, students should take some classes to enhance their awareness.,3),举例说明,督促学生认真学习的其他办法,(2011,佛山一模,),There are other ways to make students work hard.,For example, teachers can reward us with small gifts if we do a good job. Besides, students can be divided into groups to compete with each other so that we will work harder.,Skills,：,运用罗列要点或举例的方法从不同 方面展开,;,要点一般为,2-3,个,;,注意衔接，恰当使用连接词。,How to write the supporting sentences?,In order to build a green campus, effective measures should be taken.,For one thing, the school should make rules and regulations to prevent students doing harm to our green campus.,For another, students should take some classes to enhance their awareness.,A good paragraph usually include:,the topic sentence(,主题句,),supporting sentences(,说明或支持主题句的拓展句,),the coherence(,连贯,),Summary,Some connective words,1,）,first, second, third, last,2,）,firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally,3,）,to start with to begin with, next, then, furthermore, finally,4,）,first of all, besides, in addition, whats more, last but not least,5,）,on the one hand, on the other hand,（适用于相对立的两点的情况）,6,）,for one thing, for another thing,（适用于两点的情况）,Practice makes perfect!,Jackie is perhaps the most easily annoyed koala(,考拉,)at the,Featherdale,wildlife park in southern Australia. All the koalas there are unhappy and complaining. You would be too if you were used to night activities and someone kept walking you up all day while you were trying to sleep it off. Thats right-sleep it off. The average koala is always half asleep because it feeds on the leaves of a special kind that makes it sleepy.,The reason Jackie and her fellow koala are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep is so they can be hugged or photographed by tourists, who make the trips to,Featherdale,and an increasing number of other national parks for just that special experience. Whatever department in the Aussie government in charge of such things is now moving to make practice illegal, which is understandable. How would you react, my friend, if you were trying to sleep off in dozen times and some round, furry creature smelling of grass kept you walking?,*,考拉即树袋熊,【,写作内容,】,以约,120,个词就以“该不该禁止旅客和动物拍照”进行议论，内容包括：,(1),人们在参观动物时为什么喜欢和动物拍照,(2),假如你处在动物的处境，你会有什么反应,(3),你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照,【,写作要求,】,1.,在作文中可以使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不能直接引用文中的内容,2.,作文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校的名称,(,林伟滨,) If you feel lost, your goal will point out a destination for you. If you feel exhausted, your goal will refresh you. If you feel life is gloomy, your goal will shine for you.,(,周纯彬,) First of all, a goal is a guide. Once we have a goal, well spare no effort to make it real. Whats more, the goal gives us energy and make us strong enough to overcome any difficulty. In addition, with a goal, we will be determined to go for it and never give up. In a word, the goal will make us succeed in our life.,
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