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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,巧译英语意美、音美、形美,1,1. At last , a,candid candidate,!,2,1. At last , a,candid candidate,!,终于找到了一个,厚,道的,候,选人！,3,2. It was a splendid population - for all the,slow, sleepy, sluggish-brained sloths stayed,at home.,4,2. It was a splendid population - for all the,slow, sleepy, sluggish-brained sloths stayed,at home.,Version 1: 这是一批卓越能干的人民因为所有这些,行动迟缓、瞌睡稀稀、呆如树獭,的人都留在家乡了。（,余立三译文,）,Version 2: 那是一批卓越的人因为那些,慢慢吞吞、昏昏沉沉、反应迟钝、形如树獭,的人留在了家乡。（,杨莉藜译文,）,5,Version 3: 这是一批卓越能干的人民因为那些,行动迟缓、头脑迟钝、睡眼惺忪,、,呆如树獭,的人留在了家乡。（,杨莉藜译文,）,Version 4: 这帮人各个出类拔萃因为凡是,呆板、呆滞、呆头呆脑的呆子都呆在,了家里。（,马红军译文,）,6,3. Predictably, the winter will be snowy, sleety, and slushy.,7,3. Predictably, the winter will be snowy, sleety, and slushy.,译文,1：,可以预言，今年冬天将多雪，多冻雨，多泥泞。,译文,2：,可以预言，今年冬天将雪花飘飘，雪雨交加，雪路泥泞。,8,4. I am never at a loss,for a word,; Pitt is never at a loss,for the word,.,9,4. I am never at a loss,for a word,; Pitt is never at a loss,for the word,.,Version 1: 我总是能凑合找个词儿说说，可是皮特什么时候都能找到恰如其分的词儿。,Version 2: 我总能找到一个词，而皮特总能找到那个绝妙的好词。,Version 3:我总能找到一个觉得妙的词，而皮特总能找到那个绝妙的词。,10,Version 4:我总能找到一个意思相当的词，而皮特总能找到那个意思恰当的词。,Version 5: 我总是,滔滔不绝,，而皮特则是,字字珠玑,。（马红军译）,Version 6: 我和皮特都能出口成章，但我用的词大都不可言妙，而他用的总是妙不可言。,11,5. He tried to shake off his fear, and actually shook his head.,12,5. He tried to shake off his fear, and actually shook his head.,Version 1: 他想驱除内心的恐惧，但实际上只摇了摇头，仿佛表示驱除不了。,Version 2: 他拼命想摆脱内心的恐惧，结果只无奈地摆了摆头。,13,6. Better late than the late.,14,6. Better late than the late.,Version 1: 迟到总比丧命好。,Version 2: 晚了总比完了好。,Version 3: 迟了总比死了好。,Version 4: 慢行回家，快行回老家。,Version 5: 宁迟一时，不迟(辞)一世。,version 6: 宁晚三分，不抢一秒；别到阎王爷那儿去报到！,15,7. Change is part of life and the making of character, hon. When things happen that you do not like, you have two choices: You get,bitter,or,better.,16,7. Change is part of life and the making of character, hon. When things happen that you do not like, you have two choices: You get,bitter,or,better.,译文：变化是生活的一部分，而且也塑造了人的意志品德，亲爱的。当你不喜欢的事情发生了，你有两种选择：要么,痛苦不堪,；要么,痛快达观,。,17,8. The professor tapped on his desk and shouted: “Young men, Order !” -The entire class yelled: “Beer !”,18,8. The professor tapped on his desk and shouted: “Young men, Order !” -The entire class yelled: “Beer !”,Version 1: 教授敲击桌子喊道：“年轻人，请安静！” 学生：“啤酒 ！” （,注：英语的 “,order”含歧义，请安静；点菜；要饮料）,Version 2: 教授敲击桌子喊道：“你们这些年轻人吆喝（要喝）什么？” 学生： “啤酒！”,19,9. the,output,of the United Nations has not been commensurate with the,input.,20,9. the,output,of the United Nations has not been commensurate with the,input .,Version 1: 联合国的贡献与其花费已经不相称了。,Version 2: 联合国的,作用,已难抵其,费用,。,21,10. The,ballot,is stronger than the,bullet,.,22,10. The,ballot,is stronger than the,bullet,.,Version 1: 选举权比子弹更具威力。,Version 2: 选票比大炮更具威力。,Version 3:,选票,胜于,枪炮,。,Version 4:,选单,胜过,子弹,。,23,11. You reckon your,Dodge,would help you up to all these,dodges,again ?,24,11. You reckon your,Dodge,would help you up to all these,dodges,again ?,Version 1: 你以为坐上了你的道奇车就可以再次逃之夭夭？,Version 2:你以为坐上了你的道奇,跑,车就可以再次,跑,掉么？,25,12. “What does that lawyer do after he dies?”,“Lie still.”,26,12. “What does that lawyer do after he dies?” “Lie still.”,译文1：“那个律师死后能干什么？”/ “静静地躺着”。 英汉翻译概要,译文2：“那个律师死后还能干什么？”/ “躺着说鬼话”。 （马红军 译）,27,12. I love my love with an E, because shes enticing; I hate her with an E, because shes engaged; I took her to the sign of the exquisite, and treated her with an elopement; her names Emily, and she lives in the east. (,Dickens, David Copperfield),28,译文,1：,12. I love my love with an E, because shes enticing; I hate her with an E, because shes engaged; I took her to the sign of the exquisite, and treated her with an elopement; her names Emily, and she lives in the east.,我爱我的爱人为了一个E，因为她是Enticing (迷人的)；我恨我的爱人为了一个E, 因为她是Engaged (订了婚的)。我用我的爱人象征Exquisite (美妙)， 我劝我的爱人从事Elopement (私奔)，她的名字是Emily (爱弥丽)，她的住处在East (东方)。（,董秋斯译,）,29,12. I love my love with an E, because shes enticing; I hate her with an E, because shes engaged; I took her to the sign of the exquisite, and treated her with an elopement; her names Emily, and she lives in the east.,译文2： 我爱我的爱，因为她长得实在招人爱。我恨我的爱，因为她不回报我的爱。我带着她到挂着浮荡子招牌的一家，和她谈情说爱。我请她跟我一起潜逃私奔，为的是我和她能长久你亲我爱。她的名字叫爱弥丽，她家住在爱仁里。（,张谷若译,）,30,12. I love my love with an E, because shes enticing; I hate her with an E, because shes engaged; I took her to the sign of the exquisite, and treated her with an elopement; her names Emily, and she lives in the east.,译文3：,我爱我的爱人，因为她很迷人；我恨我的爱人，因已许配他人；他在我心中是美人，我带她私奔，以避开外人；她名叫虞美人，是东方丽人。（,姜秋霞、张柏然）,31,译文4：,12. I love my love with an E, because shes enticing; I hate her with an E, because shes engaged; I took her to the sign of the exquisite, and treated her with an elopement; her names Emily, and she lives in the east.,我爱我的那个“丽”，可爱迷人有魅力；我恨我的那“丽”，要和他人结伉俪；她文雅大方又美丽，和我出逃去游历； 她芳名就叫爱米丽，家住东方人俏丽。（,马红军译,）,32,译文,5：,12. I love my love with an E, because shes enticing; I hate her with an E, because shes engaged; I took her to the sign of the exquisite, and treated her with an elopement; her names Emily, and she lives in the east.,吾爱吾爱，因伊可爱；吾恨吾爱，因伊另有所爱。吾视吾爱，神圣之爱，吾携吾爱，私逃为爱；吾爱名艾米丽，吾东方之爱。,“中国翻译，1996年第六期”,33,译文,6：,12. I love my love with an E, because shes enticing; I hate her with an E, because shes engaged; I took her to the sign of the exquisite, and treated her with an elopement; her names Emily, and she lives in the east.,我爱我的心上人，因为她那样地叫人入迷（Enticing）；我恨我的心上人，因为她已订婚将作他人妻（Engaged）；她花容月貌无可比拟（Exquisite），我劝她私奔跟我在一起（Elopement）；她的名字叫埃米莉（Emily），她的家就在东城里（East）。我为我的心上人呀，一切都因为这个E！（,陆乃圣译,）,34,