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Style - Narration 记叙文 Arthurone day; when he was on the way to workPark Avenue, near the First National BankA bank robbery; Arthur helped a young man.but .was mistaken for the bank thief. the suitcase in his hand suitcasemistakenrobbery in your writing?How to make full use of the given sentences and the plot?How to make the story coherent and logical?若词数少于130，从总分中扣去2分。 Tip1: The key words that respectively stand for the most important information, the main character and the main object should be chosen in your writing. Tip2: Focus on the given sentence of paragraph2 first. And some information in it must be mentioned in paragraph 1.Tip3. Use the key nouns in the given sentences to infer more information. Paragraph 2:The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur. Arthur took a taxi and went to the police station. In Paragraph1, Arthur might have said something to the taxi driver. For example, “Sir, please take me to the police station quickly. I have something important to report to the policeman.” What will Arthur do in the police station?In Paragraph2, there may be a conversation between Arthur and the policeman. Who else may go to the police station? (a surprising end) Tip4. Write proper conversations between the related characters in each paragraph. Key Words: Park Avenue The young man suitcase in the back seat loud noise of an alarm the bank robbery the shouts people the bank thiefParagraph1:As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop! ”Two characters：Arthur and the young manArthur might realize that the young man was the bank thief. Arthur took a taxi and went to the police station. The young man wanted to get his suitcase back. There may be some money or something else in the suitcase. The young man may (not) be the bank thief. Paragraph2:The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur. Para 1Para 2Para 1&2Tip5. Use the characters and their actions to infer mor informati n. Main Idea Arthur took a taxi and went to the police station. Arthur might have said something to the taxi driver. For example, “Sir, please take me to the police station quickly. I have something important to report to the policeman.”coherent, correct, logical, reasonable,rich in vocabulary and sentence patternUnderline the key words Polish your writingParagraph 1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop! ” Arthur realized that the young man was the bank thief. He continued running, stopped a taxi and got into it. He said to the taxi driver, “Please go to the Police Station as soon as possible. I have a robbery to report to the policeman.” Then the taxi went away. Which kind is more suitable?-therefore, however, in addition/besides, whats more/furthermore, on the contrary, on the other hand. -unfortunately, suddenly(all of a sudden), to his joy, worried about., with the help of. add some details Use different structures coherence, content, language, key wordsUse transitional words (衔接词) Paragraph 1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop! ” Arthur realized that the young man was the bank thief. He continued running, stopped a taxi and got into it. He said to the taxi driver, “Please go to the Police Station as soon as possible. I have a robbery to report to the policeman.” Then the taxi went away. add some details Use different structures Use tr nsitio al words“Give my suitcase back to me!” Hearing this, Arthur immediately realized that the young man was the bank thief.So he continued running until he stopped a taxi. Then he quickly got into it and sat in the back seat .Out of breath/breathlessly, Arthur said to the taxi driver, “.”The moment the taxi driver got the request, he drove straight to the police station without hesitation. like arrow/straight to the police station. Paragraph 1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop! ” “Give my suitcase back to me!” Hearing this, Arthur immediately realized that the young man was the bank thief. So he continued running until he stopped a taxi. Then he quickly got into it and sat in the back seat. Out of breath, Arthur said to the taxi driver, “Please go to the Police Station as soon as possible. I have a robbery to report to the policeman.” The moment the taxi driver got the request, he drove straight to the police station without hesitation.add some details Use different structures Proper transition back. There may be some money or something else in the suitcase. The young man may (not) be the bank thief.coherent, correct, logical, reasonable,rich in vocabulary and sentence patternUnderline the key words Someone or something that is funny is amusing and likely to make you smile or laughTip4. Sometimes, the general key word can guide us to imagine reasonably. 7. Handwriting (neat and clear) Steps to complete a story
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