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Problems in our class give nicknames leave rubbish on the floorbe late for classcopy others homework cheat sleep in classA request for adviceA written request for advice Points should be:formal or informal?polite or impolite?What is happening?监考Jennys problem:She wrote the letter for advice about _1_.She wanted to tell the truth,but she was afraid that Zhang Ming would _2_ by teacher.She worried that Zhang Ming would be _3_ Find out some useful expressions about request:_cheatingbe punishedangry with herI am writing to you aboutI was afraid thatI worried thatWhat should I do?Three parts of a request:The beginning State your topic in the first one or two sentences of the letter.The body Briefly describe the problem.The end Ask for advice.Thank the receiver,and say that you are waiting for his or her reply.Dear Miss Chen,Im writing to you for advice about cheating.My classmate Zhang Ming cheated in the final exam.He is my best friend.After the exam,I wanted to tell the teacher the truth,but I was afraid that Zhang Ming would be punished by the teacher.Also,I worried that he would be angry with me if I did so.I dont want to lose such a good friend.What should I do?Could you please tell me how to solve it?Thank you!Best regardsJenny Part Dear _收信人_,Im writing to you for advice about_遇到的问题_Part Detail（详细地说清事情的来龙去脉）Part What shall I do now?Im looking forward to your reply?(寻求意见)Best regards（问候语）写信人 Dear _ I am writing to you for advice about _._Best regards _The structureTask:假如你是王玲，三(9)班的班长，你给学校的辅导员Mrs.Lee写信咨询，信中你向她诉说有关同学违纪的苦恼：近段时间，班上出现很多违纪现象，迟到，抄袭作业，给同学起绰号，乱扔垃圾，上课睡觉，考试作弊等。你想把问题告诉班主任，又担心同学会生气，下星期就要中段考，你不想同学养成坏习惯，影响学习，但又不知道该怎么办？Dear _,I am writing to you for advice about_What can I do?Can you help me?Thank you!_Mrs.LeeWang LinBest wishesKey wordsProblems in the class be late for copy others homework give nicknames leave rubbish on the floor sleep cheat There be 有break the rules 违反纪律be worried aboutget angry withget into bad habitsSome useful expressions:I often worry about I dont know how to I feel upset becauseShould I In my opinion Check your writing:Do you use the tense(时态)，spelling(拼写)，punctuation(标点)，capitalization(大写字母)correctly?Dear Mrs.Lee,I am writing to you for advice about my class problems.I am a monitor in class 8 grade 9.may students break the rules.Some students are late for class.Some copy others homework.Some give nicknames to others.Some one leave rubbish n the floor.Some sleep in the class.Some cheat in the exam.I wanted to tell these to my class teacher.But I worried that my classmates would be angry with me.Next week,there will be our mid-exam.Im afraid that my classmates would get into bad habits.It is bad for study.What should I do?Can you help me?thank you!Best wishesWang Lin试卷书面表达各分数档要求试卷书面表达各分数档要求第五档（第五档（13-1513-15分）：表达清楚，行文连贯，语言基本分）：表达清楚，行文连贯，语言基本无误。无误。第四档（第四档（10-1210-12分）：表达基本清楚，行文基本连贯，分）：表达基本清楚，行文基本连贯，语言有少量错误。语言有少量错误。第三档（第三档（7-97-9分）：能写明基本要点，语言虽有较多错分）：能写明基本要点，语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意。误，尚能达意。第二档（第二档（4-64-6分）：能写出几个要点，但语言有较多错分）：能写出几个要点，但语言有较多错误，影响意思表达。误，影响意思表达。第一档（第一档（0-30-3分）：白卷或文不对题，或错误百出，不分）：白卷或文不对题，或错误百出，不知所云。知所云。1.Serve the theme and decide the tense.(紧扣主题紧扣主题,判断时态判断时态,人称人称)2.Dont translate sentence by sentence.(不要逐句翻译不要逐句翻译)3.Make a good beginning and ending.(写好开头结尾写好开头结尾)4.Use the simple sentence structures to avoid making mistakes.(运用简单句型，避免错误运用简单句型，避免错误)5.Try to use conjunctions,good structures and expressions.(使用连词，漂亮句型和表达方式使用连词，漂亮句型和表达方式)6.Express your own opinions if necessary.（发表自己的感受）（发表自己的感受）7.Pay attention to the capital letters and punctuations.(注意字母大小写和标点符号注意字母大小写和标点符号)How to write betterAssignment Improve your writing.Review Unit 4.
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