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英语写作常见错误与分析 Add Subtitles Here.英语写作常见错误与分析 Add Subtitles Here一一不一致（不一致（Disagreements）Whenonehavemoney,hecandowhathewantto.Onceonehasmoney,hecandowhathewants(todo).一 不一致（Disagreements）When one二二修饰语错位（修饰语错位（MisplacedModifiers）IbelieveIcandoitwellandIwillbetterknowtheworldoutsidethecampus.IbelieveIcandoitwellandIwillknowtheworldoutsidethecampusbetter.二 修饰语错位（Misplaced Modifiers）三三句子不完整（句子不完整（SentenceFragments）Therearemanywaystoknowthesociety.ForexamplebyTV,radio,newspaperandsoon.Therearemanywaystoknowsociety,forexample,byTV,radio,andnewspaper.三 句子不完整（Sentence Fragments）T四四悬垂修饰语（悬垂修饰语（DanglingModifiers）Todowellincollege,goodgradesareessential.Todowellincollege,astudentneedsgoodgrades.四 悬垂修饰语（Dangling Modifiers）T五五词性误用词性误用(MisuseofPartsofSpeech)Nonecannegativetheimportanceofmoney.Nonecandenytheimportanceofmoney.五 词性误用(Misuse of Parts of Spe六六指代不清指代不清(AmbiguousReferenceofPronouns)Andwecanalsoknowthesocietybyservingityourself.Wecanalsoknowsocietybyservingitourselves.六 指代不清(Ambiguous Reference 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other programs.These young people focus their attention on other forms of celebration instead of immersing themselves in TV.Despite that,the majority of mid-aged people and senior citizens uphold the importance of the traditional performance.The most striking feature of this gala is its traditionally close link with ordinary peoples lives.Most of people view this gala as an annual staple on the traditional Chinese Spring Festival Eve.They all have a restless night and glue their eyes on the television.四级作文模板 Some individuals deem 四级作文模板四级作文模板 I am not supportive of the view that the grand gala should be abandoned.Undoubtedly,it plays a vital role in the celebration of Chinese New Year.To increase its appeal and meet young adults need,the up comingperformance should invite some big names including super stars from Hongkong and Taiwan.We are all eagerly anticipating this unforgettable evening show.四级作文模板 I am not supportive