朱自清《背影》两种英译对比ppt课件

背影朱自清背影（张）TheSightofFathersBack（杨）MyFathersBack朱自清背影英译2种（张培基杨宪益/戴乃迭）观察分析两种译文的翻译技巧背影朱自清背影1我与父亲不相见已二年余了，我最不能忘记的是他的背影。（张）ItismorethantwoyearssinceIlastsawfather,andwhatIcanneverforgetisthesightofhisback.（杨）ThoughitisovertwoyearssinceIsawmyfather,Icanneverforgetmylastviewofhisback.1我与父亲不相见已二年余了，我最不能忘记的是他的背影。2那年冬天，祖母死了，父亲的差使也交卸了，正是祸不单行的日子，我从北京到徐州，打算跟着父亲奔丧回家。（张）In the winter of more than two years ago,grandma died and father lost his job.I left Beijing forXuzhou to join father in hastening home to attendgrandmasfuneral.（杨）Thatwintermygrandmotherdied,andmyfathersofficial appointment was terminated,for troubles nevercomesingly.IwentfromBeijingtoXuzhou,togobackwithhimforthefuneral.2那年冬天，祖母死了，父亲的差使也交卸了，正是祸不单行的日子3到徐州见着父亲，看见满院狼藉的东西，又想起祖母，不禁簌簌地流下眼泪。（张）When I met father in Xuzhou,the sight of thedisorderly mess in his courtyard and the thought ofgrandmastartedtearstricklingdownmycheeks.（杨）When I joined him in Xuzhou I found the courtyardstrewnwiththingsandcouldnothelpsheddingtearsatthethoughtofgranny.3到徐州见着父亲，看见满院狼藉的东西，又想起祖母，不禁簌簌地4父亲说，“事已如此，不必难过，好在天无绝人之路！”（张）Fathersaid,“Nowthatthingsvecometosuch a pass,its no use crying.Fortunately,Heavenalwaysleavesoneawayout.”（杨）“Whatspastisgone,”saidmyfather.“Itsnousegrieving.Heavenalwaysleavesussomewayout.4父亲说，“事已如此，不必难过，好在天无绝人之路！”5回家变卖典质，父亲还了亏空；又借钱办了丧事。（张）AfterarrivinghomeinYangzhou,fatherpaidoffdebtsbysellingorpawningthings.Healso borrowed money to meet the funeralexpenses.（杨）Once home he sold property andmortgagedthehousetoclearourdebts,besidesborrowingmoneyforthefuneral.5回家变卖典质，父亲还了亏空；又借钱办了丧事。6这些日子，家中光景很是惨淡，一半为了丧事，一半为了父亲赋闲。（张）Between grandmas funeral andfathers unemployment,our family wastheninreducedcircumstances.（杨）Those were dismal days for ourfamily,thanks to the funeral and fathersunemployment.6这些日子，家中光景很是惨淡，一半为了丧事，一半为了父亲赋闲7丧事完毕，父亲要到南京谋事，我也要回北京念书，我们便同行。（张）Afterthefuneralwasover,fatherwastogotoNanjingtolookforajobandIwastoreturntoBeijingtostudy,sowestartedouttogether.（杨）After the burial he decided to go toNanjingtolookforaposition,whileIwasgoingbacktoBeijingtostudy,sowetravelledtogether7丧事完毕，父亲要到南京谋事，我也要回北京念书，我们便同行。8到南京时，有朋友约去游逛，勾留了一日；第二日上午便须渡江到浦口，下午上车北去。（张）IspentthefirstdayinNanjingstrollingaboutwithsomefriendsattheirinvitation,andwasferryingacrosstheYangtseRivertoPukouthenextmorningandthencetakingatrainforBeijingontheafternoonofthesameday.（杨）AfriendkeptmeinNanjingforadaytoseethesights,andthenextmorningIwastocrosstheYangtzetoPukoutotaketheafternoontraintothenorth.8到南京时，有朋友约去游逛，勾留了一日；第二日上午便须渡江到9父亲因为事忙，本已说定不送我，叫旅馆里一个熟识的茶房陪我同去。他再三嘱咐茶房，甚是仔细。但他终于不放心，怕茶房不妥帖；颇踌躇了一会。（张）Fathersaidhewastoobusytogoandseemeoffattherailway station,but would ask a hotel waiter that he knew toaccompanymethereinstead.Heurgedthewaiteragainandagaintotakegoodcareofme,butstilldidnotquitetrusthim.Hehesitatedforquiteawhileaboutwhattodo.（杨）Asfatherwasbusyhehaddecidednottoseemeoff,andheaskedawaiterweknewatourhoteltotakemetothestation,givinghimrepeatedandmostdetailedinstructions.Evenso,afraidthatthefellowmightletmedown,heworriedforquiteatime.9父亲因为事忙，本已说定不送我，叫旅馆里一个熟识的茶房陪我同10其实我那年已二十岁，北京已来往过两三次，是没有甚么要紧的了。他踌躇了一会，终于决定还是自己送我去。我两三回劝他不必去；他只说，“不要紧，他们去不好！”（张）Asamatteroffact,nothingwouldmatteratallbecauseIwasthentwentyandhadalreadytravelledontheBeijing-PukouRailwayacoupleoftimes.Aftersomewavering,hefinallydecidedthathehimselfwouldaccompanymetothestation.Irepeatedlytriedtotalkhimoutofit,butheonlysaid,“Nevermind!Itwontdototrustguyslikethosehotelboys!”（杨）AsamatteroffactIwasalreadytwentyandhadtravelledtoandfromBeijingonseveraloccasions,sotherewasnoneedforallthisfuss.Butaftermuchhesitationhefinallydecidedtoseemeoffhimself,though I told him again and again there was no need.“Nevermind,”hesaid,“Idontwantthemtogo.”10其实我那年已二十岁，北京已来往过两三次，是没有甚么要紧的11我们过了江，进了车站。我买票，他忙着照看行李。行李太多了，得向脚夫行些小费，才可过去。他便又忙着和他们讲价钱。（张）WeenteredtherailwaystationaftercrossingtheRiver.WhileIwasatthebookingofficebuyingaticket,fathersawtomyluggage.Therewasquiteabitofluggageandhehadtobargainwiththeporteroverthefee.（杨）WecrossedtheYangtzeandarrivedatthestation,whereIboughtaticketwhilehesawtomyluggage.Thiswassobulkythatwehadtohireaporter,andfatherstartedbargainingovertheprice.11我们过了江，进了车站。我买票，他忙着照看行李。行李太多12我那时真是聪明过分，总觉他说话不大漂亮，非自己插嘴不可。（张）IwasthensuchasmartaleckthatIfrowneduponthewayfatherwashagglingandonthevergeofchipping in a few words when the bargain was finallyclinched.（杨）IwassuchabrightyoungmanthatIthoughtsomeofhisremarksundignified,andbuttedinmyself.12我那时真是聪明过分，总觉他说话不大漂亮，非自己插嘴不可。13但他终于讲定了价钱；就送我上车。他给我拣定了靠车门的一张椅子；我将他给我做的紫毛大衣铺好坐位。他嘱我路上小心，夜里警醒些，不要受凉。（张）Gettingonthetrainwithme,hepickedmeaseatclosetothecarriagedoor.Ispreadontheseatthebrownishfurlinedovercoathehadgottailormadeforme.Hetoldmetobewatchfulonthewayandbecarefulnottocatchcoldatnight.（杨）Buteventuallyhegotthemtoagreetoaprice,andsawmeontothetrain,choosingmeaseatbythedoor,onwhichIspreadtheblacksheepskincoathehadmademe.Hewarnedmetobeonmyguardduringthejourney,andtotakecareatnightnottocatchcold.13但他终于讲定了价钱；就送我上车。他给我拣定了靠车门的一张14又嘱托茶房好好照应我。我心里暗笑他的迂；他们只认得钱，托他们直是白托！而且我这样大年纪的人，难道还不能料理自己么？唉，我现在想想，那时真是太聪明了！（张）Healsoaskedthetrainattendantstotakegoodcareofme.Isniggeredatfatherforbeingsoimpractical,foritwasutterlyuselesstoentrustmetothoseattendants,whocaredfornothingbutmoney.Besides,itwascertainlynoproblemforapersonofmyagetolookafterhimself.Oh,whenIcometothinkofit,IcanseehowsmartyIwasinthosedays!（杨）Thenheurgedtheattendanttokeepaneyeonme,whileIlaughed up my sleeve at him-all such men understood wasmoney!AndwasntIoldenoughtolookaftermyself?Ah,thinkingback,whatabrightyoungmanIwas!14又嘱托茶房好好照应我。我心里暗笑他的迂；他们只认得钱，托15我说道，“爸爸，你走吧。”他望车外看了看，说，“我买几个橘子去。你就在此地，不要走动。”我看那边月台的栅栏外有几个卖东西的等着顾客。（张）I said,“Dad,you might leave now.”But helookedoutofthewindowandsaid,“Imgoingtobuyyou some tangerines.You just stay here.Dont movearound.”I caught sight of several vendors waiting forcustomersoutsidetherailingsbeyondaplatform.（杨）“Dontwait,father,”Isaid.Helookedoutofthewindow.“Illjustbuyyouafewtangerines,”hesaid.“Wait here,and dont wander off.”Just outside thestationweresomevendors.15我说道，“爸爸，你走吧。”他望车外看了看，说，“我买几16走到那边月台，须穿过铁道，须跳下去又爬上去。父亲是一个胖子，走过去自然要费事些。我本来要去的，他不肯，只好让他去。（张）Buttoreachthatplatformwouldrequirecrossingtherailwaytrack and doing some climbing up and down.That would be astrenuousjobforfather,whowasfat.Iwantedtodoallthatmyself,buthestoppedme,soIcoulddonothingbutlethimgo.（杨）To reach them he had to cross the lines,which involvedjumpingdownfromtheplatformandclamberingupagain.Asmyfatherisastoutmanthiswasnaturallynoteasyforhim.ButwhenIvolunteeredtogoinsteadhewouldnothearofit.16走到那边月台，须穿过铁道，须跳下去又爬上去。父亲是一个胖17我看见他戴着黑布小帽，穿着黑布大马褂，深青布棉袍，蹒跚地走到铁道边，慢慢探身下去，尚不大难。可是他穿过铁道，要爬上那边月台，就不容易了。（张）Iwatchedhimhobbletowardstherailwaytrackinhisblackskullcap,blackclothmandarinjacketanddarkbluecotton-paddedcloth long gown.He had little trouble climbing down the railwaytrack,butitwasalotmoredifficultforhimtoclimbupthatplatformaftercrossingtherailwaytrack.（杨）SoIwatchedhiminhisblackclothcapandjacketanddarkbluecotton-paddedgown,ashewaddledtothetracksandclimbedslowlydown-notsodifficultafterall.Butwhenhehadcrossedthelineshehadtroubleclamberinguptheotherside.17我看见他戴着黑布小帽，穿着黑布大马褂，深青布棉袍，蹒跚地18他用两手攀着上面，两脚再向上缩；他肥胖的身子向左微倾，显出努力的样子。（张）His hands held onto the upper part of theplatform,his legs huddled up and his corpulent bodytipped slightly towards the left,obviously making anenormousexertion.（杨）He clutched the platform with both hands andtriedtoheavehislegsup,strainingtotheleft.18他用两手攀着上面，两脚再向上缩；他肥胖的身子向左微倾，19这时我看见他的背影，我的泪很快地流下来了。我赶紧拭干了泪，怕他看见，也怕别人看见。我再向外看时，他已抱了朱红的橘子望回走了。（张）WhileIwaswatchinghimfrombehind,tearsgushedfrommyeyes.Iquicklywipedthemawaylestheorothersshouldcatchmecrying.ThenextmomentwhenIlookedoutofthewindowagain,fatherwasalreadyonthewayback,holdingbrightredtangerinesinbothhands.（杨）Atthesightofhisburlybacktearsstartedtomyeyes,butIwipedthemhastilysothatneitherhenoranyoneelsemightseethem.WhennextIlookedouthewasonhiswaybackwithsomeruddytangerines19这时我看见他的背影，我的泪很快地流下来了。我赶紧拭干了泪20过铁道时，他先将橘子散放在地上，自己慢慢爬下，再抱起橘子走。到这边时，我赶紧去搀他。（张）In crossing the railway track,he first put thetangerinesontheground,climbeddownslowlyandthenpickedthemupagain.Whenhecamenearthetrain,Ihurriedouttohelphimbythehand.（杨）He put these on the platform before climbingslowlydowntocrossthelines,whichhedidafterpickingthefruitup.WhenhereachedmysideIwastheretohelphimup.20过铁道时，他先将橘子散放在地上，自己慢慢爬下，再抱起橘子21他和我走到车上，将橘子一股脑儿放在我的皮大衣上。于是扑扑衣上的泥土，心里很轻松似的，过一会说，“我走了；到那边来信！”我望着他走出去。（张）Afterboardingthetrainwithme,helaidallthetangerinesonmy overcoat,and patting the dirt off his clothes,he lookedsomewhatrelieved and said aftera while,“Imustbe going now.Dont forget to write me from Beijing”I gazed after his backretreatingoutofthecarriage.（杨）Weboardedthetraintogetherandheplumpedthetangerinesdownonmycoat.Thenhebrushedthedustfromhisclothes,asifthat was a weight off his mind.“Ill be going now,son,”he saidpresently.“Write to me once you get there.”I watched him walkaway.21他和我走到车上，将橘子一股脑儿放在我的皮大衣上。于是扑22他走了几步，回过头看见我，说，“进去吧，里边没人。”等他的背影混入来来往往的人里，再找不着了，我便进来坐下，我的眼泪又来了。（张）Afterafewsteps,helookedbackatmeandsaid,“Gobacktoyourseat.Dontleaveyourthingsalone.”I,however,didnotgobacktomyseatuntilhisfigurewaslostamongcrowdsofpeoplehurryingtoandfroandnolongervisible.Myeyeswereagainwetwithtears.（杨）Afterafewstepsheturnedbacktolookatme.“Goonin!”hecalled.“Theres no one in the compartment.”When his backdisappearedamongthebustlingcrowdIwentinandsatdown,andmyeyeswerewetagain.22他走了几步，回过头看见我，说，“进去吧，里边没人。”等他23近几年来，父亲和我都是东奔西走，家中光景是一日不如一日。（张）Inrecentyears,bothfatherandIhavebeenlivingan unsettled life,and the circumstances of our familygoingfrombadtoworse.（杨）ThelastfewyearsfatherandIhavebeenmovingfromplacetoplace,whilethingshavebeengoingfrombadtoworseathome.23近几年来，父亲和我都是东奔西走，家中光景是一日不如一日。24他少年出外谋生，独力支持，做了许多大事。那知老境却如此颓唐！（张）Fatherlefthometoseekalivelihoodwhenyoungand did achieve quite a few things all on his own.Tothinkthatheshouldnowbesodowncastinoldage!（杨）Whenhelefthisfamilyasayoungmantolookfora living,he succeeded in supporting himself and didextremely well.No one could have foreseen such acomedowninhisoldage!24他少年出外谋生，独力支持，做了许多大事。那知老境却如此颓25他触目伤怀，自然情不能自已。情郁于中，自然要发之于外；家庭琐屑便往往触他之怒。他待我渐渐不同往日。（张）The discouraging state of affairs filled him with an uncontrollablefeelingofdeepsorrow,andhispent-upemotionhadtofindavent.Thatiswhyevenmeredomestictrivialitieswouldoftenmakehimangry,andmeanwhilehebecamelessandlessnicewithme.（杨）Thethoughtofthisnaturallydepressedhim,andashehadtoventhisirritationsomehow,heoftenlosthistemperovertrifles.Thatwaswhyhismannertowardsmehadgraduallychanged.25他触目伤怀，自然情不能自已。情郁于中，自然要发之于外；家26但最近两年的不见，他终于忘却我的不好，只是惦记着我，惦记着我的儿子。（张）However,theseparationofthelasttwoyearshasmadehimmoreforgivingtowardsme.Hekeepsthinkingaboutmeandmyson.（杨）Butduringtheselasttwoyearsofseparationhehasforgottenmyfaultsandsimplywantstoseemeandmyson.26但最近两年的不见，他终于忘却我的不好，只是惦记着我，惦记27我北来后，他写了一信给我，信中说道，“我身体平安，惟膀子疼痛利害，举箸提笔，诸多不便，大约大去之期不远矣。”（张）AfterIarrivedinBeijing,hewrotemealetter,inwhichhesays,“Imallrightexceptforaseverepaininmyarm.Ievenhavetroubleusingchopsticksorwritingbrushes.PerhapsitwontbelongnowbeforeIdepartthislife.”（杨）AfterIcamenorthhewrotetome:“Myhealthisallright,onlymyarmachessobadlyIfindithardtoholdthepen.Probablytheendisnotfaraway.”27我北来后，他写了一信给我，信中说道，“我身体平安，惟膀子28我读到此处，在晶莹的泪光中，又看见那肥胖的，青布棉袍，黑布马褂的背影。唉！我不知何时再能与他相见！（张）ThroughtheglisteningtearswhichthesewordshadbroughttomyeyesIagainsawthebackoffatherscorpulentforminthedarkbluecotton-paddedclothlonggown and the black cloth mandarin jacket.Oh,how Ilongtoseehimagain!（杨）WhenIreadthis,throughamistoftearsIsawhisbluecotton-paddedgownandblackjacketoncemoreashis burly figure walked away from me.Shall we evermeetagain?28我读到此处，在晶莹的泪光中，又看见那肥胖的，青布棉袍，黑