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人教人教2019版版必修第一册必修第一册 Unit 1 写作训练写作训练波峰李树果9/27/2022Mr Lee19/27/2022Mr Lee2假定你是李华，最近收到了你的美国朋友假定你是李华，最近收到了你的美国朋友Jenny的来信。的来信。她在信中说由于刚进入高中还不能适应新环境，她不知她在信中说由于刚进入高中还不能适应新环境，她不知道如何去结交新朋友，因而情绪低落。请你给她回一封道如何去结交新朋友，因而情绪低落。请你给她回一封信，内容包括信，内容包括：1.向Jenny表示问候和安慰。2.针对她的问题提出建议：(1)放学后邀请同学一起参加活动；(2)遇到困难时，互相帮助。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯第一步第一步 谋篇谋篇9/27/2022Mr Lee3明确体裁话题1.指出问题所在2.提出摆脱困境、适应环境的建议3.给出祝愿首段：引出问题 中段：就事说事，根据具体情况给出恰当建议尾段：表达自己的愿望一般现在时；第二人称为主建议信；如何适应环境确定时态人称布局文章框架列出核心要点第二步第二步 遣词遣词9/27/2022Mr Lee41.感觉不好2.进入高中3.面临同样的问题4.太担心5.V.邀请feel badenter high schoolface the same problemworry too much about.invite9/27/2022Mr Lee56.参加take part in7.n.活动activity8.相互理解understand each other9.与沟通communicate with10.处于困境中in trouble第三步第三步 造句造句9/27/2022Mr Lee61.你进入高中后情绪低落。你进入高中后情绪低落。（主系表；介词短语）（主系表；介词短语）You feel bad after entering high school.2.你的同学们也面临着同样的问题。你的同学们也面临着同样的问题。（主谓宾；现在进行时（主谓宾；现在进行时)Your classmates are also facing the same problem.3.你不必太担心。（主谓状）你不必太担心。（主谓状）You dont have to worry too much about it.9/27/2022Mr Lee74.尽力邀请你的同学们一起参加一些活动。（祈使句尽力邀请你的同学们一起参加一些活动。（祈使句)Try to invite your classmates to take part in some activities together.5.这些活动有助于你们相互理解。这些活动有助于你们相互理解。（主谓宾补；一般将来时（主谓宾补；一般将来时)These activities will help you understand each other.6.帮助有困难的同学。（祈使句；定语从句帮助有困难的同学。（祈使句；定语从句)Help students who are in trouble.第四步第四步 升级升级9/27/2022Mr Lee81.用因果结构合并句用因果结构合并句2和句和句3。Your classmates are also facing the same problem,so you dont have to worry too much about it.2.用定语从句合并句用定语从句合并句4和句和句5。Try to invite your classmates to take part in some activities together,which will help you understand each other.第五步第五步 写摹背诵写摹背诵9/27/2022Mr Lee9Dear Jenny,I am sorry to hear you feel bad after entering high school.As far as I know,your classmates are also facing the same problem,so you dont have to worry too much about it.Here are some suggestions to help you.9/27/2022Mr Lee10 First,try to invite your classmates to take part in some activities together,which will help you understand each other better by communicating with them.Besides,help students who are in trouble.I do hope you will find my suggestions useful.Yours sincerely,Li Hua
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