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专题十五书面表达之图文类 高考24话题之(十五)：社会(Society)假设你是李华。你第一次来到美国学习，发现一切很新鲜，感到兴奋，但你同时也遇到了些问题，为此你要给英国的笔友Thomas写一封信。内容包括：学习和生活情况及遇到的问题；希望笔友Thomas提供建议。【写作话题】 It has been some time_we contacted each other last time.Recently I_(be) excited_ (find) everything fresh and unfamiliar here.However, as it is the first time that I_ (come) to study in the USA, sometimes I find_ (me) lonely and homesick.【语法填空】sincehave been to findhave comemyself To my delighted, I have made some progresses in my study and live with host family helps me learn much about the new culture.答案delighted改为delight；progresses改为progress；live改为living；much改为more【语法改错】 Whats more, Im not accustomed to the teaching methods which is quite different from that in China.Id like you to give me some advices on how adapt myself to the new environment.答案is改为are；that改为thoseadvices改为advice；adapt前面加to Dear Thomas, It has been some time since we contacted each other last time.How is everything going with you？Recently I have been excited to find everything fresh and unfamiliar here.To my delight, I have made some progress in my study and living with host family helps me learn more about the new culture.【范文背诵】 However, as it is the first time that I have come to study in the USA, sometimes I find myself lonely and homesick.Whats more, Im not accustomed to the teaching methods which are quite different from those in China.I also feel very anxious about the difficulties that I met when communicating with local students. Therefore, Id like you to give me some advice on how to adapt myself to the new environment so as to increase my learning efficiency, and how to make friends with the locals to improve my spoken English.Best wishes！Yours，Li Hua 根据范文画线部分仿写下面情景：自从从英国回来以来已有两个月了。_使我感到非常高兴的是，那儿，来自不同文化的人们和睦相处。_答案It is two months since I returned from England. Much to my delight, people from different cultures live in harmony there.【自主空间】 (2016北京)假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“地球日”系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“Actions for a Greener Earth”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。提示词：地球日Earth Day做真题悟高考限时25分钟 审题谋篇审文体要求写一篇记叙文，介绍地球时我们所做的事情及影响，要注意记叙文的五个要素。要条理清晰，重点突出。审人称因为是记叙文，时态以一般过去时为主。审时态文章要求我们描述参加地球日的活动，所以写作时以第一人称为主。 列要点认真观察四幅图画，展开合理的想象，从每幅图画中提炼出一两个要点：Picture 1：学校贴满了地球日的海报；呼吁我们参与“绿色地球”的活动。Picture 2：我们班的主意：废物再利用；把破旧衣服变成玩具娃娃和手提包；把硬纸板变成纸巾盒；把空塑料瓶子变成小花瓶等。Picture 3：把这些做成的东西赠送给老人和小孩；他们非常高兴。Picture 4：被邀请发言，介绍我们班变废为宝的过程。最后：我们的感受。 范文展示 Actions for a Greener EarthA week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth. Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials.We brought to our classroom wornout clothes, pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles and turned those into dolls, handbags, tissue boxes and small vases.That weekend, we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there.All were very happy with those unexpected gifts, especially little kids and elderly people.We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school. We are very proud of ourselves and believe we can do more for a better world.名师点睛范文使用了非谓语动词calling upon us to join in the actions和so.that句型与宾语从句we can do more for a better world等，句式多样；还使用了固定词组call upon sb. to do sth., join in, come up with, make use of, turn.into, give away, be proud of等，使作文内容变得丰富。 .题型特点分析1图画类作文的“图”不局限于某一类型的图，如漫画、广告画，也包括其他图画、照片等情景形式。考生们可根据情景图示的寓意、内容或情节线索，传递信息和表达自己的思想。探考点攻难点图画作文 2此类书面表达开头均有简短文字说明，说明图画的相关内容(如场合、主题等)。3命题人给出“你的短(作)文应包含以下内容”，这是写作的关键。4然后给出“注意”，常包括3点：可参照适当发挥。作文词数100个左右。作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 .技巧微课【规范答题步骤】1认真审题要做到五审：审开头要求、审图画内容、审“你的作文应包含以下内容”、审“注意”内容、审“参考词汇”和开头提示。2分段落，列提纲通过审题确定作文的时态、人称和段落结构，列出自己要写的提纲。 3选词造句要点列出后，对列出的要点逐一翻译，但这并不是简单的翻译，翻译时，要注意力求语言准确得当，同时考生应学会尽可能使用较高级的语法结构和词汇，如非谓语动词、复合句等，最大限度地完善文章。4整理成篇，行文连贯接下来要根据内容分清文章的层次，确定详略，将写好的单句重新排列组合起来，使之前后连贯成一篇完整的文章。同时选用恰当的关联词使文章过渡自然，行文流畅。 .写作素材(1)What is illustrated/reflected in the picture is that.(2)What the picture describes vividly is a kind of common phenomenon that.(3)The picture vividly reflects a phenomenon where our society is in bad need of honesty. (4)Seeing the picture, I cant help thinking how ridiculous.is.However, what is reflected in the picture is not a rare phenomenon in modern society.(5)There are at least two good reasons accounting for.(6)There may be three factors which contribute to/account for/are responsible for this phenomenon.(7)The second reason is that. (8)Faced with this phenomenon/these problems, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with.(9)It is high time we took some measures to put an end to this phenomenon/these problems.(10)Only in this way can we.(11)First, .Second, .Third, .(注后用小写字母)(12)The social problem has aroused great concern among people.(13)We should raise peoples awareness of. .黄金模板图画类作文三段式模板：首先要求考生根据图画描述图画的大致情况，然后要求考生根据图画，对图画进行适当的阐释(解释、说明和分析)，最后要求考生给出自己的建议、观点、原因等。第一段：描述图画。As is vividly shown in the picture above，图画的内容/The picture tells us that 这幅图画大致反映的意思。 第二段：解释、说明和分析图画。The implied meaning of the picture should be taken into account seriously.First/To begin with，揭示涵义/原因/结果。Second/ Whats more，揭示涵义/原因/结果。Last but not least/Finally，揭示涵义/原因/结果。And the social problem(如果是现象的话可以用phenomenon)has arisen the great concern/care of our whole society/world/all the people。 第三段：给出自己的看法或想法以及解决问题的办法。In my view/p o in t o f view/As for me, we should take some measures as follows to deal with the problem shown in the picture.First, we should具体的措施。And then we have to/must具体的措施。Only in these ways can we solve the problem of 具体的问题。 .题型特点分析1体裁上多以议论文和说明文为主。2根据图表的呈现方式不同，可分为柱状图、曲线图、数字表格和饼状图四类。柱状图多要求学生通过柱状图图中数据和提示内容写一篇短文，属于比较、对照类，也可根据提示写成议论文。曲线图常用来表示事物的变化发展趋势，其特点是信息集中，一目了然。数字表格是以表格形式，将统计的数据或被说明的事物直接用表格形式体现出来，即统计表。饼状图则是以圆内扇形的大小表示总体内部结构的变化。图表作文 .技巧微课【规范答题步骤】1开门见山，点明主题点明图表所反映的主题或问卷、民意调查的结果或点明你要展开阐述的话题。 2呈现数据，分析原因呈现调查所得数据、结果，阐明必要的理由或原因；或分析数据间的主要差异及趋势。要特别注意层次。一定要注意筛选出能说明图表主题思想的典型数据；图表和数据内容不必全部描述，要突出重点，抓住图表中的极端。例如：最大或最小、最多或最少、最好或最差。要善于抓住总的规律、趋势，归纳增减率。 3归纳总结或发表评论如果这篇文章讲的是一个令人担忧的问题，那么最后一段写解决办法的可能性最大。如果这篇文章讲的是一个好的变化，那么最后一段很可能是两种情况可能写负面的影响或存在的问题，也可能写未来的趋势或发展方向。此外，写作时还要注意切忌写成“填表题”，“一对一直译”，“句式单一”，遗漏“间接要点”，应巧妙组合信息。 .写作素材1描述图表中的变化与发展趋势快速上升：rise(increase/go up)sharply(rapidly/ quickly/dramatically)缓慢下降：decrease(reduce/come down/decline/ drop/fall)slowly(gradually) 2阐述事实的句式There was a great/slight increase/rise in.在方面剧增/略有涨幅。There has been a sudden/slow/rapid fall/drop in.在方面骤降/下降缓慢/迅速下降。It is 20% lower/higher than.比低/高20%。 The number/rate had nearly doubled, as against that of last year.与去年相比，这个数字/比例增长了近一倍。The number is.times as much as that of.这个数字是的倍。It increases/rises/decreases/reduces by.%/two thirds.增长/降低了%/三分之二。 By comparison with., it decreased(fell)/increased from.to.和相比，从减少/增加到It is obvious from the graph/chart that.ran k the first/highest, while.turn out to be the lowest.图中清楚显示是排在第一位/最高的，而结果最低。 A, which accounts for.%, ranks the first; next in line is B with.%, followed by C, making up.%, finally D, at.%.A排在第一，占%，紧接着是B，占%，跟着是C，占%，最后是D，占%。 3表述原因的句式The reason why/for.is that.的原因是One may think of the change as a result of.人们可能把这种变化认为是的结果。The change in.largely results from the fact that.在上的变化很大程度上是由的事实造成的。 .黄金模板As is shown by the figure/percentage in the table/picture，_has been on rise/decrease, significantly/dramatically rising/decreasing from _数字1 in 年 to 数字2 in _年From this sharp rise/decline in the chart, it goes without saying that 根据数据变化得出结论 There are at least two good reasons accounting for 要分析的现象On the one hand, 原因1.On the other hand, 原因2 is due to the fact that 要分析的现象In addition, 原因3 is responsible for 要分析的现象As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that 作者的观点或解决办法I am sure my opinion is both sound and wellgrounded.
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