留学申请书范文抒写亲情 引起招生官共鸣

留学申请书范文：抒写亲情留学申请书范文：抒写亲情 引引起招生官共鸣起招生官共鸣【精彩范文】Washington Seattle UniversityDiscuss how your familys experience or cultural history enriched you or presented you with opportunities or challenges in pursuing your educational goals.When I stood on the stage of the Christmas Concert and heard the music become stronger and stronger,I began to think about my grandfather.Pieces of his life flashed before my eyes;his words echoed in my ears.Almost unconsciously,the lyrics came out of my mouth.You raise me up,so I can stand on mountains;You raise me up,to walk on stormy seas;I am strong,when I am on your shoulders;You raise me up to more than I can be.My grandfather is a great man.He grew up in a peasant family but somehow he managed to attend the top university at that time.He managed to live a comfortable life in Hong Kong but he gave it up for the mainland China because it was then in need of talented professionals like my grandfather.Without hesitation,he moved to China and devoted himself to scientific research and teaching.I often asked him whether he regretted that decision to leave Hong Kong,but my grandfather always smiles and says that it always feels good when you can sacrifice for those you love and those you care for.When grandfather was at the age of 55，he suffered from hemiplegia and he could not move his right side of the body.Doctors told him to stop working and focus on his rehabilitation treatment.However,my grandfatherdetermined and focused as he was,refused to leave his research unfinished.It is hard to imagine what it might have felt like to bear such great pain and difficulty in daily life,but also continuing to do research in such pain is really inspiring.My grandfather s passion for his work made him overcome all the difficulties;he could not write with his right hand thus he learned to write with the left one.In order to give lectures to his students,he would stand up even after countless falls,and begin to walk again even if it hurt.This is what my grandfather is like,a person with a weak body but a strong heart.When I am down and,my soul,so weary;When troubles come and my heart burdened be;Then,I am still and wait here in the silence,Until you come and sit awhile with me.When I went to study in the United States,I became foreigner in a strange country.There were times of loneliness,discouragement and frustration,but whenever I felt weak and upset I would hear my grandfather，s voice and remember his persistence in everything he does,even while he was ill.Then suddenly his unyielding character would encourage me to bravely move on no matter what I might be confronted grandfather raised me up and I feel lucky to have him as my teacher who will always be in my heart,to be strong on his shoulders.Because of his love and inspiration,I am determined and ready to go to college in the United States and not fear the feelings of loneliness or discouragement because I know I can overcome all the difficulties in the world,just like grandfather.【我的祖父】站在圣诞音乐会的舞台上，听着伴奏渐强，我便开始想念我的祖父。他生活中的点点滴滴浮现在我的眼前，他曾经的言语飘入耳畔。几乎是下意识地，我就开口唱出了这段歌词：你鼓舞了我，让我能站在山峰之巅 你激励了我，让我能闯过狂风暴雨 站在你的肩上，我更加坚强你养育了我，让我屹立世间祖父在我心中是个伟大的形象。他生于农民家庭，但却努力考上当时国内一流的大学。他曾在香港过着富足的生活，但内地需要专家学者时，他却为祖国 放弃了安逸。他毫不犹豫地回到家中，一心扑在 科研教学上。我经常问他，当时离开香港，有没有遗憾。但祖父总是一笑带过，告诉我：如果能为自己爱的人、自己关心的人奉献终生，也不失为一件幸福的事。祖父55岁那年不幸偏瘫，身体右侧不再受支配。医生让他别再工作了，专心养病。然而，专心固执 的祖父却不肯撇下自己未完成的研究。在生活中忍受这样的疼痛和艰难真的难以想象，而在此情况下还继续工作，真的让人感到敬佩。祖父凭着对工作的热情，战胜 了一切困难：因为不能用右手写字，他开 始学习使用左手。为了给学生们上课，他几次倒下后都再次站起来，即便很痛还是坚持走到课堂。这就是我的祖父，纵然身体虚弱，但内心十分强大。当我失落时，我的灵魂感到疲倦 麻烦来袭时，我的内心愈发沉重 但我仍旧在此，安静等待直到你来，和我坐在一起来美国学习后，我成了这个陌生国度中的异域人。有时候，我会觉得孤单失落，觉得挫败。但每次 不开心时，我就会想起祖父的声音，想到他对自己工作的坚持，在生病的时候仍然不放弃。祖父不屈不挠的品质会给我鼓舞，让我不管遇到任何困难都勇敢前行。祖 父抚养我长大，他亦师亦友，他给了我可 以依赖的肩膀，我真的倍感幸运。因为他的爱和鼓舞，我更加坚定了去美国念书的决心，更加勇敢，不怕孤独挫败，因为我知道，我像祖父一样，能够克服世界上 的一切困难。【佳文精评】写自己的祖先永远是个好题材。我们人人都会从自己的父母、祖父母那里继承各种各样的特 征。而这个女学生的精神榜样是她的祖父，一个归国学者。他的坚毅和爱国之心，鼓舞着她在异国他乡努力奋斗。这篇文章小巧，睿智，读着很亲切。思想简单流 畅，难得的优秀文章。这类文章也 很容易博得招生官的共鸣。