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能力提升练专题五短文改错(一)Test 12020 广州市综合检测二 Flowing through the centre of Guangzhou, the Pearl River plays an important role in the life of city. Each day, boats take people in and from work, and ships transport goods to factory and markets. The river is also a great source of entertain. Along the riverbanks, where you can see people walking, exercising and enjoy beautiful views. In recent years, locals had worked hard to improve the river environment. Among their efforts are planting trees along the banks or creating several new parks. Most important, theyve reduced river pollution, making the water so clean as people can now fish in the river.Test 22020 合肥市高三第三次教学质量检测 There was a lively discussion held in my class last Friday. It was main about protecting the fine Chinese culture. Some suggested raising peoples aware of preserving our culture and making people fall in love with them. For example, we could conduct creative activity like discovery tours and culture shows to help people have better understanding of our culture. Others think some courses should be offered in schools, which goal was to help students learn more about our customs, ways of life and so on. And in my view, what was mattered was that everyone should feel proud in our own culture. Also, we should attempt to passing our fine culture down from generation to generation.Test 32020 太原市高三年级模拟三 I have been learning English since I am in primary school, but the truth was that I was not so good at listening. No matter how hardly I tried, I couldnt understand clearly which my English teachers or native speakers said. One day, I was surfing the Internet while an advertisement for English listening drew your attention. To my amaze, it was a website where recording of some well-known books were provided. When see the website, I fell in love it, which turned out to be that useful. Now I have made a progress in listening.Test 42020 成都 市 高中毕 业 班第三 次 诊断 The first time I heard theexpression “Know yourself ”by Socrates, I didnt realize its meaning until I go touniversity. I started my university life unwillingly, because I didnt want to leave my parents and university of engineering was not my dream school too. However, I changed my mind complete after a semester. My schoolmates are from different place, some of which are really outstanding. This makes me realized there is always someone much more better capable. Since then, to know myself has become an importance part of my life. Only by knowing who I am or where I am can I really follow the right path.能力提升练专题五短文改错 (一)Test 1答案与解析：Flowing through the centre of Guangzhou, the Pearl River plays animportant role in the life of city. Each day, boats take people in and fromthetowork, and ships transport goods to factory and markets. The river is also afactoriesgreat source ofentertain . Along the riverbanks, where entertainmentyou can see peoplewalking, exercising andenjoy beautiful views. In recent years, locals hadenjoyinghaveworked hard to improve the river environment. Among their efforts are planting trees along the banks or creating several new parks. Most important ， theyveandimportantlyreduced river pollution, making the water so clean as people can now fish in thethatriver.city 前加 the冠词漏用。此处 city 指的是上文提到的 Guangzhou，表示特 指，应该用定冠词修饰，故在 city 前加 the。in 改为 to介词误用。表示“到(某处)”应用介词 to。factory 改为 factories名词单复数误用。factory 是可数名词，又其前没有限定词修饰，且根据语境可知，此处应用复数形式，故用 factories。entertain 改为 entertainment动词和名词混用。介词后一般跟名词、代词或 动名词作宾语，故此处应用 entertain 的名词形式 entertainment。删除 where 关系副词多用。分析句子结构可知，“ you can see people walking. views”是主句，而非 where 引导的非限制性定语从句，因此删除 where。enjoy 改为 enjoying动词形式误用。根据句中的 and 可知，此处与 walking、 exercising 并列，作宾语补足语，故用 enjoying。had 改为 have动词时态误用。根据句中的“In recent years”可知，此处应 用现在完成时，又主语 locals 为复数形式，故用 have。or 改为 and连词误用。根据语境可知，此处表并列关系而非选择关系，故 用 and。important 改为 importantly形容词和副词混用。分析句子结构可知，此处 应为副词，修饰整个句子，故用 importantly。as 改为 that固定搭配误用。“so. that.”如此以至于”是固定 搭配，引导状语从句，故用 that。Test 2答案与解析：There was a lively discussion held in my class last Friday. It wasmain about protecting the fine Chinese culture. Some suggested raising peoples mainlyaware of preserving our culture and making people fall in love with them. Forawarenessitexample, we could conduct creative activity like discovery tours and cultureactivitiesshows to help people have better understanding of our culture. Others thinkathoughtsome courses should be offered in schools, which goal was to help students learnwhosemore about our customs, ways of life and so on. And in my view, what wasmattered was that everyone should feel proud in our own culture. Also, we shouldofattempt to passing our fine culture down from generation to generation.passmain 改为 mainly形容词和副词混用。分析句子结构可知，此处修饰谓语 动词，应用副词形式，所以将 main 改为 mainly。aware 改为 awareness形容词和名词混用。分析句子结构可知，名词所有 格后面应该用名词形式，所以将 aware 改为 awareness。them 改为 it代词误用。此处代指 our culture，应用单数形式，所以将 them 改为 it。activity 改为 activities名词单复数误用。根据本句中的“like discovery tours and culture shows”以及该词前面无限定词修饰可知，此处指的活动不止一种， 应该用可数名词的复数形式，所以将 activity 改为 activities。have 后加 a冠词漏用。have a better understanding of.为固定用法，意为 “对有更好的理解” ，所以在 have 后面加 a。think 改为 thought动词时态误用。根据文章第一句“ There was a lively discussion held in my class last Friday ”可知，本篇文章主要讲述的是上周五课堂 上进行的讨论，故此处叙述的事情发生在过去，时态应用一般过去时，所以把 think 改为 thought。which 改为 whose。定语从句关系词误用。分析句子结构可知，空处引导 定语从句，在从句中作定语，先行词为 some courses，所以将 which 改为 whose。删除 was动词语态误用。分析句子成分可知，what 与 mattered 之间为主 谓关系，matter 为不及物动词，不用被动语态，故删除 was。in 改为 of介词误用。feel proud of.为固定搭配，意为“为感到骄傲”， 所以将 in 改为 of。passing 改为 pass动词形式误用。attempt to do sth. 为固定搭配，意为“努 力做某事”，所以将 passing 改为 pass。Test 3答案与解析：I have been learning English since I am in primary school, but the truth waswasthat I was not so good at listening. No matter how hardly I tried, I couldnthardunderstand clearly which my English teachers or native speakers said. One day, Iwhatwas surfing the Internet while an advertisement for English listening drew yourwhenmyattention. To my amaze ， it was a website where recording of someamazementwell-known books were provided. Whenrecordingssee the website, I fell in love seeingwithit, which turned out to be that useful. Now I have made a progress in listening.am 改为 was 动词时态误用。since 引导时间状语从句时，从句时态一般 用一般过去时，此处讲述的 in primary school 是过去，应用一般过去时，所以将 am 改为 was。hardly 改为 hard 副词混用。hardly 意为“几乎不”，hard 作副词时意为 “努力地，猛烈地”，结合句意“无论我多么努力地尝试”可知，此处应将 hardly 改为 hard。which 改为 what。引导词误用。分析句子结构可知，空处引导宾语从句， 作 understand 的宾语，结合句意“我无法清楚地明白老师或当地人所说的话”可 知，此处引导词应用 what，所以将 which 改为 what。while 改 为 when 连 词 误 用 。 本 句 为 固 定 句 型 “sb. was/were doing.when.”，意为“某人正在做突然”，所以将 while 改为 when。your 改为 my代词误用。结合句意“一条英语听力的广告吸引了我的注意 力”可知，此处代词 your 应该改为 my。amaze 改为 amazement动词和名词混用。to onesn.为固定表达，意为“令 某人的是”，所以把 amaze 改为 amazement。recording 改为 recordings名词单复数误用。分析句子结构可知，本句谓语动词为 were provided ，所以主语应该为可数名词复数，recording of somewell-known books 为主语，核心词为 recording，所以将 recording 改为 recordings。 see 改为 seeing动词形式误用。分析句子结构可知，本句谓语为 fell，空处作非谓语，逻辑主语为 I，两者之间为主动关系，作时间状语，所以将 see 改为 seeing。love 后加 with介词漏用。fall in love with.为固定用法，意为“爱上”， 所以在 love 后加 with。去掉 a冠词多用。make progress 意为“取得进步”，progress 为不可数名 词，所以将不定冠词 a 去掉。Test 4答案与解析：The first time I heard the expression “Know yourself ”by Socrates, I didntrealize its meaning until I go to university. I started my university lifewentunwillingly, because I didnt want to leave my parents and university ofa/theengineering was not my dream school too . However, I changed my mindeithercomplete after a semester. My schoolmates are from different place ， somecompletelyplacesof which are really outstanding. This makes me realized there is alwayswhomsomeone much morebetterrealizecapable. Since then, to know myself has become animportance part of my life. Only by knowing who I am or where I am can Iimportantreally follow the right path.andgo 改为 went时态误用。根据上文中的“didnt”和下文中的“started my university life”可知，此处要用一般过去时。university 前加 a/the冠词漏用。此处可以泛指“一所工程大学”，也可以 特指“我”就读的“那所工程大学”，故应在 university 前加 a/the。too 改为 either副词误用。否定句中用“either”表示“也”。complete 改为 completely形容词和副词混用。此处修饰动词“changed”， 应用副词形式。place 改为 places名词单复数误用。place 为可数名词，其前无限定词修饰， 结合语境可知此处表示复数概念，应用复数形式。which 改为 whom关系代词误用。先行词为“My schoolmates”，指人，又关系词在介词后作宾语，故用 whom。realized 改为 realize非谓语动词误用。使役动词后加省略 to 的不定式作宾 语补足语。删除 better比较级误用。capable 前加 more 变成比较级，better 多余，应删 除。importance 改为 important名词和形容词混用。此处修饰名词 part，应用形 容词。or 改为 and连词误用。根据语境可知，此处表示“只有知道我是谁和我在 哪里，我才能走上正确的道路”，此处为并列关系而非选择关系，故将 or 改为 and。
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