2014高考英语 书面表达 2013暑假练习题（3）

2014高考英语书面表达：2013暑假练习题（3）及答案解析第二节：书面表达(满分30分)请根据下图写一篇100-120个词的短文。你的短文应包括下列要点：1. 简要描写图画内容；2. 说明图画含义；3. 谈谈你的看法。注意：短文的开头已给出（不计词数）。 As is shown in the picture above, 参考答案及评分标准第三部分：写作第二节：书面表达 As is shown in the picture, a boy is shouting at his dad, who looks upset, not knowing what to do with his son. It seems that they dont get along well with each other. Nowadays, many families with teenagers face such a problem, which is extremely bad for the growth of a child and the harmony of a family. For example, quarrels can often be seen when parents attempt to prevent their child doing what is not suitable in their opinion, such as playing computer games, because the kid is unwilling to do it as told. What has caused the frequent conflicts between them? There can be many reasons, of which, I think a lack of understanding and communication is the most important one. It is inevitable that disagreement between parents and kids will appear. However, if we learn to communicate with each other peacefully and equally, a harmonious relationship can be easily born.书面表达评分原则： 1上文仅为参考范文，学生可用不同的语言表达形式来表述要点。内容必须包括三个部分：描述，寓意和观点。2本题总分为30分，按以下5个档次给分。评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。第一档：(16分)只能写出一两个要点；语言错误很多，只有个别句子正确；第二档：(712分)能写出部分要点；语言错误多，影响意思表达；第三档：(1318分)能写明基本要点；语言虽有较多错误，但能基本达意；第四档：(1924分)能写明全部或绝大部分要点；语言有少量错误；行文不够连贯，表达基本清楚；第五档：(2530分)能写明全部要点：语言基本无误；行文连贯，表达清楚。 3词数少于80的，从总分中减去2分。 4评分时，应注意的主要内容为：时态、人称、内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。 5拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。*结束第二节书面表达你的室友李华和高朋上周一晚上发生小摩擦。原因是李华打开手电筒看书学习，高朋认为这影响他休息，两人发生争执。你帮助他们化解了矛盾。请根据上述内容用英语写一篇120个词左右的短文。包括下列要点：1. 叙述矛盾发生时的情景2. 你对这件事的看法注意：短文的开头已给出（不计词数） 参考词汇：摩擦 friction 手电筒flashlightLihua and Gaopeng are my roommates._参考答案及评分标准书面表达参考范文(满分30分) Last Monday Lihua stayed up reading after 10oclock in our dormitory. After a whole day of study , feeling very exhausted, Gaopeng went to bed immediately the dormitory light was turn off.However, he couldnt fall asleep with the torchlight. At first he tried to keep calm, but after a while he began to lose his temper, complaining about Lihuas selfishness. Neither of would give in and friction continued. While they were quarreling, I tried to calm them down, saying all of us should care about others. They realized their fault and made up finally. After all, we share the same dormitory and every one is part of the family. Whenever we face any problem, we should learn to understand and communicate with each other. When we think more for others, we can create a harmonious environment.*结束第二节 书面表达(满分30分) （改编自浙江省金华十校2012届高三上学期期末考试）请根据右边的图片，写一篇短文，内容包括：1描述漫画内容； 2说出其中的寓意；3发表你的观点。注意：1可适当增添内容，使文章层次分明，行文连贯。2字数120左右。3开头语已为你写好（不计入总字数） High expectations harm a childAs is shown in the picture above，_第二节：书面表达（满分30分）High expectations harm a childAs is shown in the picture above，the parents hold a bar over their heads excitedly, urging their child to jump it over while the child stares at the bar blankly. Perhaps, parents do this with good intentions, but the results are quite different.Such is the case with us in our daily life. Parents today are setting too high expectations for their children. Surely high expectations serve as a necessary drive for children to improve, but sometimes going fast is as bad as falling short. When the goals are far beyond their reach, childrens interest and self-confidence may suffer seriously, which can do great harm to character-building. So its time for the parents to adjust their standards and tell their children how proud they are of him for whatever he has achieved. 书面表达评分原则： 1上文仅为参考范文，学生可用不同的语言表达形式来表述要点。内容必须包括三个部分：描述，寓意和观点。2本题总分为30分，按以下5个档次给分。评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。第一档：(16分)只能写出一两个要点；语言错误很多，只有个别句子正确；第二档：(712分)能写出部分要点；语言错误多，影响意思表达；第三档：(1318分)能写明基本要点；语言虽有较多错误，但能基本达意；第四档：(1924分)能写明全部或绝大部分要点；语言有少量错误；行文不够连贯，表达基本清楚；第五档：(2530分)能写明全部要点：语言基本无误；行文连贯，表达清楚。 3词数少于80的，从总分中减去2分。 4评分时，应注意的主要内容为：时态、人称、内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。 5拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。*结束