浙江省2012高考英语二轮复习 专题训练 短文改错 书面表达（99）

浙江省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（99）第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） 下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删减或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend weekend with you. Luckily I was the amcompletely free then, so Ill to say “yes”. Ill arrive in Bristol at around 8 p.m. in Friday evening. onLast Sunday afternoon, I went to the zoo with Lily. There was lots of people there. I found a girl cry in the zoo. She was lost and she cant find her mother. We decided to help her. I try my best find the broadcasting station in the zoo. On the same time Lily played with her and looked after her careful there. The little girl stopped crying and played with Lily. At last his mother came. That made me feel very happily. I thought I really did a good thing. If everyone helps with each other, the world will become more beautiful. 第二节：书面表达（共1题，满分30分）高一（4）班学生就学校研究型课程的要求对全校学生进行了一次关于钱是否能带来幸福进行了调查，请根据下列材料写一篇报告，介绍有关调查情况，并发表自己的意见。认为钱是幸福来源不认为钱很重要1钱很重要;2钱可以解决一切，没有钱我们什么也做不了;3. 有了钱我们就能过上舒适的生活1钱不是万能的;2钱买不到幸福;3. 过于关注赚钱，就会失去健康，友谊甚至爱注意：不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥。词数在120左右。Recently I have made an investigation on whether money is the source of happiness. _第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）there was 改成there are cry改成crying， find sb. doing sth.意思是“看见某人正在做某事” cant改为couldnt. 短文上下文都是一般过去时 try改为tried find前加 to。try ones best to do sth. on the same time改成at the same time.careful改成carefully，副词修饰动词looked after. his mother 改成her mother. happily改成happy,是系表结构。 with划掉。help each other意思是“互相帮助”第二节：书面表达（共1题，满分30分）Recently I have made an investigation on whether money is the source of happiness. The students have different opinions.Some students think that money is the source of happiness. Money is important and we can use money to solve any problem. Without it, we can do nothing. Besides, it enables us to live a comfortable life.Others, however, are against it. In their opinion, money doesnt mean everything. We can buy happiness with money. If someone focuses too much attention on making money, in time he will lose his healthy, friendship and even love.To be honest, I think we should not regard money as everything. Money is just a tool that can help us solve problems. What we should do is to use it properly. In this way, all of us can lead a happier life.2用心 爱心 专心