山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练 短文改错 写作（28）

山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（28）短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，井在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Lots of bad behaviors still exist around us. For an example, some people often cross the streets against traffic rules. Some didnt make room for the old or disabled at the bus and some even litter and spit freely in public. The above behavior do great harm to our city and will leave a bad impression on visitors. Its high time which we solved the problem.Firstly, Ill start with myself to perform good manners all the time and somewhere. Secondly, Ill call at all the people around to behave polite. Thirdly, everyone should do his bit help build up a harmonious society. Next, some effective measures should be taken to give up the bad behaviors.书面表达假设你是李华，最近你校美国外教Jack想要为他的两个儿子在学生中找一名中文辅导教师。你希望为他们辅导。请你用英语给Jack写封申请信。内容主要包括：1个人情况，性别、年龄； 2个人特长：语文好、喜欢英语、善于交流、有耐心；3优势：曾为外国人辅导中文、担任学校广播站英语广播员。参考词汇：辅导教师tutor注意：1词数100左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear JackMy name is Li Hua. Yours. Li Hua 短文改错第二句：去掉For后面的an； 第三句：didnt改为dont；at改为on； 第四句：behavior改为behaviors； 第五句：which改为that； 第六句：somewhere改为everywhere； 第七句：at改为on；polite改为politely； 第八句：help前加to； 第九句：Next改为LastlyOne possible version:Dear Jack,My name is li Hua. Im an 18-year-old boy, studying in the same school where you work. I know you want to find a Chinese tutor for your two sons. Im sure I am fit for the job. My advantages are as follows.Yours,Li Hua3用心 爱心 专心