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七、图表类作文,专题五第二节分类突破,考题研析,解题必备,内容索引,随堂限时练,考题研析,典例,满分作文,阅卷老师点评,典例 请根据你对以下两幅图的理解，以“Actions Speak Louder than Words”为题，用英语写一篇作文。,参考词汇：banner横幅；stump树桩 你的作文应包括以下内容： 1.简要描述两幅图的内容； 2.概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解； 3.举例说明两幅图对你的启示。 注意： 1.可参照图片适当发挥； 2.作文词数150 左右； 3.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。,Actions Speak Louder than Words _ _ _ _,满分作文 Actions Speak Louder than Words People celebrate Earth Day differently.In Picture 1，a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps，but in vain， while Picture 2 shows a couple happily planting trees. The message conveyed here is clear：“Actions speak louder than words.” Our earth is suffering severe damage.Should we just pay lip service or take practical measures to protect it? The answer is definitely the latter.Immediate actions should be taken like stopping cutting down trees to better the environment.,Actions are important in other fields，too.Instead of shouting empty slogans，it is more meaningful to donate books and sports goods to children in need.We should strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules，stopping at the red light rather than plaining about the traffic jams.Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to acplish.,阅卷老师点评 本文内容充实、语言规范、句子连贯、用词贴切。段落层次分明。第一段：描述两幅图的内容；第二段：概述对两幅图中不同做法的理解；第三段：发表启示：举例说明图画给的启示。 1.过渡自然 本篇习作中使用的过渡词不多，但是整个段落安排井然有序。People celebrate Earth Day differently.；The message conveyed here is clear.；Actions are important in other fields，too.使得作者娓娓道来。,2.高级词汇和丰富句式的使用 习作中使用了高级词汇如put up a banner，suffer severe damage，take practical measures，better the environment，donate books，follow traffic rules；高级句式如Only引导的倒装句：Only when we.can we.。,解题必备,图表式书面表达包括图画和图表式两类，主要是以图画(图表)为载体，附带少量文字提示或说明，要求考生从观察入手，通过对图画(图表)所含的信息的理解，发挥想象力，按照一定的顺序把图画(图表)的内容准确、生动地表述出来。这就要求考生需要具有一定的观察能力、推理能力和语言组织能力。其写作技巧有：,1.读图。在读图时务必关注四个方面： (1)题目。漫画的标题是漫画的眼睛，透过这个“眼睛”，可以洞察整幅漫画的主题。 (2)画面。漫画画面上的每一个细节都对表达漫画的寓意有提示作用。 (3)语言。漫画为了表达其寓意，常常配有言简意赅、画龙点睛的语言文字，思考这些语言文字中所隐含的作者的观点。 (4)夸张。漫画为了说明某种观点，常常对人物行为或场景进行夸张描绘，以引起读者共鸣。夸张之处往往是漫画的弦外之音，是漫画所要表达的寓意所在。,2.解意。在理解和阐释漫画含义时要关注三点： (1)确定作者的基本态度，是属于夸张褒扬还是批评讽喻； (2)运用想象力，合理地把漫画所描述的现象和实际生活相联系； (3)要特别注意除图片外的文字提示部分，它往往暗示了行文的方向和重点，必须仔细阅读。,3.谋篇。英语漫画类作文在行文时往往分为三个部分： (1)describe the picture(2) interpret the picture(3) give your opinions 这样的结构可以使文章逻辑清晰，脉络分明。同时，这三个部分都有一些套语可以使用，熟记这些套语可以帮助学生明显提高文章的档次。如： (1)读图描写句式 The picture is talking about/shows. The picture shows a mon phenomenon. The picture describes an interesting phenomenon. In the picture，there are/is. The picture above is about. Lets look at the picture above/first.,(2)解图描写句式 It seems very ridiculous that.However，this kind of story is performed everywhere. The picture shows that.It is the exact reflection of. The picture indicates that we.Nowadays，it is a mon phenomenon that. This is a satirical(讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of mon phenomenon among.,(3)个人观点描写句式 I think/believe that. As far as Im concerned，. In my opinion，. From my point of view，.,随堂限时练,(2018扬州高三期末) You dont have to look far to find concerns about how technology will steal our jobs.Its been widely noticed that automation(自动化) is making machines more powerful and shortening the list of current jobs,that only a human can do.Martin Fords new book，Rise of the Robots，looks at how far machines have e.,At the same time，some people are getting more optimistic about the outlook(前景) of having a robot at home to help share the burden.When it es to doing housework，most of Americans would like to do it better while someone else just did it for them. 写作内容 1.用约30个单词概述以上图文信息的主要内容； 2.用约120个单词阐述你对机器人进入人类生活的看法，并用23个理由或论据支撑你的看法。,参考范文2,写作要求 1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句； 2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.不必写标题。 评分标准 内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。,参考范文1,【参考范文1】 With the development of technology，robots are ing for our current jobs.When some people show their concern about the issue,77% of Americans consider it normal to have a robot in their homes. Im totally in favor of owning robots in our daily life.First of all，they can finish tasks faster than humans with more accuracy.Whats more，they do not care about the fort and security of their situation，therefore saving workers from boring and even dangerous tasks.Last but not least，they can work at a constant speed with no breaks and perform assignments at a steady high level.,To be honest，what we should really worry about is not the presence of robots themselves but the absence of necessary knowledge about them.Therefore，it is definitely wiser for people to bee more familiar with our future helper rather than consider it a question of robots winning and humans losing.,【参考范文2】 With the development of technology，robots are widely used.While 77% of Americans consider it normal to have a robot in their homes，some people dont think it a wise practice.,Im against robots ing into widespread use in our daily life.First of all，convenient as it may be to employ robots，they may take over the jobs now done by humans，resulting in many people losing their jobs.Whats more，if operating systems in robots got infected with viruses，robots would not perform well as designed，even causing a disaster.Last but not least，I believe humans have better judgement in dealing with some plex matters especially when there is not one clear answer. To be honest，even though employing robots widely may be an irresistible trend，we can not turn a blind eye to its possible threat and its side effects.,
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