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高考书面表达训练如何审题、如何遣词造句,最近，你校师生帮助辍学的李明同学返校。请根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观介绍这一情况。,注意：1、信的开头已为你写好。2、词数：100左右。3、参考词汇：捐款offermoney;募捐collectmoney,如何审题？,如何审题？,1、审定体裁、题材；2、审定人称；3、审定时态；4、审定要点；5、审定结构。,1、审定体裁、题材：2、审定人称：3、审定时态：4、审定要点：5、审定结构：,审题提示:,书信、李明遭遇第三和第一人称现在时、过去时见题干可分为两段,学生习作1：,LiMingwasonetopstudentsofourschool.Hewasgoodathisstudiesandalwaysreadytohelpothers.However,hehastoleaveschool.Hisfatherdiedandhismotherisseriouslyillinbed.,Correctmistakesifany!,学生习作2：,学生习作2：,Thewholeschoolwasshockedatthenewsandanxiousaboutit.Quicklytheydecidedtohelphimout.Everyteacherandstudentofferedmoneytohimandsomestudentswenttolookafterhismotherinturn.Atweekendstheywentouttocollectmoney.,Correctmistakesifany!,学生习作3：,Withtheirhelp,LiMingwillreturntoschoolsoon.Thatsall.Thankyou.Yours,WeiFang,Correctmistakesifany!,Deareditor，Imwritingtotellyouwhattheteachersandstudentshavedonetohelpastudentwhodiscontinuedhisstudiesinourschool.LiMingisastudentofourschool.Heisnotonlygoodathisstudiesbutalsoalwaysreadytohelpothers.Buthehadtoleaveschoolbecausehisfatherdiedandhismotherisseriouslyill.Asaresult,hehadtomakemoneytohelphisfamily.Hearingthenews,alltheteachersandstudentswereshocked.InordertohelpLiMing,wedecidedtooffermoneytohimandsomestudentswentouttocollectmoneyforhiminthestreets.Withourhelp,LiMinghasalreadyreturnedtoschool.Withbestwishes!(100)Yours,WeiFang,学生佳作欣赏！,高考范文家乡变化,DearBob,ItsmyhometownJiangcheng.ThecitystandsonthebankoftheChangjiangRiver.Itisabeautifulplaceforpeopletolivein.Itseconomyhasbeendevelopingrapidlyinthepasttenyears.Newfactories,houseshavebeenbuilt.Moreschoolsandhospitalsareavailableforitspeople.However,therearesomeproblems,suchaswaterandairpollutionandheavytrafficinrushhours.Inmyopinion,Jiangchengshoulddevelopitseconomyscientifically.Iwouldalsothinkthatthegrowthpopulationshouldbebroughtundercontrolsothatwellhaveabetterhometowninfuture.,请赏析高考书面表达如何遣词造句！,如何遣词造句？,掌握5种简单句句型1、主语连系动词表语；2、主语vi.3、主语vt.宾语；4、主语vt.双宾语；5、主语vt.复合宾语；,最常见的连系动词？,1、be；2、look,feel,smell,sound,taste；3、seem,appear；4、become,get,turn,come,go,grow；5、continue,keep,remain,；6、come,fall,prove,turnout；,1、会后，她看起来有点疲倦。2、他好像在写什么东西。3、夏季，鸡蛋容易变坏(go)。4、她知道她必须保持镇静(keep)。5、她终于梦想成真(come)。,请用适当的连系动词造句：,英语中最常见的四十个及物动词,agreeaskbelieveconsidercontinuedecideexpectenjoyfeelfindfinishforgetgethavehearhelphopeimagineknowlearnlikemindneednoticeofferorderpreferpretendpromiseregretremembersayseesuggesttellthinkwantwarnwatchwish,请按要求将下列句子翻译成英文,1、我们班有50个学生（来自农村）(therebe)。2、昨天是小王打扫了教室(itthat)。3、我认为学好英语很重要(it)。4、为了在高考中取得好成绩，我们正努力学习(inorderto,inorderthat)。5、他起得迟，结果又迟到了(sothat)。,高考书面表达五大常用句型,1、Therebe句型；2、Itis(was)+被强调部分+that(who)；3、it作形式主语或形式宾语的句型；4、to/inorderto/soasto/sothat/inorderthat表示“目的”5、sothat/suchthat/soasto/enoughto/tooto表示“结果”,书面表达解题步骤：,1、审，即：审定体裁、题材、人称、时态、结构等；2、编，即：编写要点，按顺序列出；3、写，即：连词成句，连句成文；4、查，即：查内容，查格式，查语法，查书写等。,求职信,1、LiHua，22，theEnglishDepartmentofYangzhouUniversity；2、begoodatEnglishlistening，speakalittleGerman,operateacomputer；3、workasatypist,aguide；4、getmoreinformationfrom,goforatalk；,审定要点：,Dearsir,IhavejustreadinthenewspaperthatasecretaryoftheEnglishlanguageiswantedinyourcompany.Iamthereforewritingtoyoutointroducemyself.Idliketogetthejob.MynameisLiHua,acollegestudentof22.NowIamstudyingintheEnglishDepartmentofYangzhouUniversity.NotonlycanIlistento,speak,readandwriteEnglishwell,butalsoIcanreadandspeakalittleGerman.Besides,Icanoperatethecomputer.OnceIworkedasatypistduringmysparetime,andasaguideduringsummerholidays.ThebossesIworkedforwereallsatisfiedwithmywork.Youcangetmoreinformationaboutmefrommyuniversity.Iamwillingtovisityourfirmatanytimeforatalk.Withbestwishes.(103)Yoursfaithfully,LiPing,学生佳作欣赏!,Correctanymistakesinyourpartnerscompositionifthereareany.,Homework,Thanksforyourattention!,Goodbye!,
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