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1.1.下星期他将离开去澳大利亚了。下星期他将离开去澳大利亚了。He will leave Australia next week.to for 2.2.他三年前来我校教英语。他三年前来我校教英语。wrong phrase He to teach English in our school three years ago.has comecamewrong tense3.3.我们的英语口语进步不少。我们的英语口语进步不少。Our English has made great progress.speakingspokenaWe have made great progress in our spoken English.wrong order/sentence pattern How to write correct sentences 1.Think of correct _2.Think of correct _3.Think of correct _phrasestenseorder/sentence pattern2012011 1年盐城市中考翻译句子年盐城市中考翻译句子1.Amy擅长游泳。Amy is .2.为什么不尽你最大的努力去帮助需要帮助的人?try your best to help people?3.ORBIS医生们几乎没有空闲时间与家人团聚。ORBIS doctors have any to get together with their families.4.因为公共场所禁止吸烟，我相信越来越多的人将会戒烟。I guess more and more people will smoking because its not allowed in .5.最近，盐城已经成功地举办了两场为贫困儿童筹款的慈善演出。Recently two charity shows successfully in Yancheng to raise money for .good at swimmingWhy notin needhardlyWhy dont youfree time/spare timegive up/stoppublic placeshas been heldpoor childrenHow to write a good composition Before-writingBefore-writing While-writingWhile-writing After-writingAfter-writing 1.To _ all the information given carefully2.To write _ well3.To _ sentences well4.To _ your composition carefully readsentences join check 抄抄组组集集连连抓抓审审作文作文集句成段集句成段组段成篇组段成篇审清题意审清题意连词成句连词成句抓住要点抓住要点抄写规范抄写规范如何写作如何写作 初中三年的英语学习中，我们与北京阳光中学初中三年的英语学习中，我们与北京阳光中学的同学成了朝夕相处的朋友，其中的同学成了朝夕相处的朋友，其中Daniel的善的善良和助人为乐等优秀品质给我们留下了深刻的良和助人为乐等优秀品质给我们留下了深刻的印象。请根据课本内容及下表提示，用英语写印象。请根据课本内容及下表提示，用英语写一篇题为一篇题为“My Friend Daniel”的的 短文。短文。(2011盐城中考）盐城中考）注意事项：注意事项：1.词数：词数：80词左右（已给出的文章开头不计入总词数）；词左右（已给出的文章开头不计入总词数）；2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；3.文章必须包含表格所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。文章必须包含表格所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。字数字数结构结构体裁体裁人称人称主题主题时态时态以一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时为主以一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时为主DanielDanielAppearanceAppearance LikesLikes DislikesDislikessportssportsPersonalityPersonalityhelpfulhelpfulhelp an old woman cross the road help an old woman cross the road kindkindwork at the Helping Hands Club work at the Helping Hands Club creativecreativecreate a TV programmecreate a TV programme What can you learn from him?What can you learn from him?已知信息已知信息未知信息未知信息1.List some keywords about appearance and hobbies.Phrases:_ hobbies:_2.List some keywords about Personality.Phrases:_ _3.List some keywords about what to learn from him.Phrases:_ _ _ 抓住要点，列关键词抓住要点，列关键词wears glasses.helpfulhelp an old woman cross the road kind work at the Helping Hands Club like playing computer games dislikes doing sports._help each otherget along well with others1.Make sentences with the keywords about appearance and hobbies.Sentences:_ _2.Make sentences with the keywords about Personality.Sentences:_ _3.Make sentences with the keywords about what to learn from him.Sentences:_ _连词成句、成段、成篇连词成句、成段、成篇He wears glasses.He likes playing computer games but dislikes doing sports.Daniel is helpful and kind.Once he helped an old woman cross the road.-We will try our best to help each other and get along well with others-My Friend Daniel My friend Daniel comes from Beijing Sunshine Secondary School.He wears glasses.He likes playing computer games but dislikes doing sports.Daniel is helpful and kind.Once he helped an old woman cross the road.He spends much of his spare time working at the Helping Hands Club.He is such a creative boy that he created a TV programme for a competition.Daniel is also polite and everyone likes him.Daniel is so great that we must learn from him.We will try our best to help each other and get along well with others to create a happy home for both you and me.范文展示范文展示and,but,or,however,besides,whats more,otherwise,so,therefore,in a word,etc.so/suchthat 定语从句定语从句.so that./too.to.宾语从句宾语从句 notuntil./It is.to do sth 等等。等等。中考英语写作评分标准中考英语写作评分标准 一档文（一档文（1 15 5-1313分）分）写出全部内容要点，层次清楚，写出全部内容要点，层次清楚，语言流畅，有句式变化，语言流畅，有句式变化，有复杂结构，至少有复杂结构，至少2-32-3个，个，基本无语法错误，只有基本无语法错误，只有1-21-2个，个，或有少量由于使用复杂结构或有少量由于使用复杂结构而引起的语法或拼写错误，而引起的语法或拼写错误，但不影响意义理解。但不影响意义理解。作文中作文中应避免应避免的几种常见的几种常见语言错误语言错误：1.时态错误（扣分多，一个时态错误扣分时态错误（扣分多，一个时态错误扣分在在1分左右）。分左右）。2.中国式的英语（不正确的英文表达会中国式的英语（不正确的英文表达会让让整句不得分整句不得分）。）。3.单词拼写错误及大小写（单词拼写一定单词拼写错误及大小写（单词拼写一定要过关要过关）。）。4.介词介词,代词，非谓语动词或形容词副词代词，非谓语动词或形容词副词的不正确使用（对单词的的不正确使用（对单词的词性词性要要熟悉熟悉）。）。名词单复数（名词单复数（细心细心就可以避免的错）。就可以避免的错）。另外另外作文中书写不规范，卷面不作文中书写不规范，卷面不整洁也是要失分的（中考中有整洁也是要失分的（中考中有12分的卷面整洁分分的卷面整洁分，这两分，这两分不能不能丢！丢！）。）。解决方法：解决方法：平时认真规范书写，平时认真规范书写，少用或不用胶带或修正液，尽量少用或不用胶带或修正液，尽量减少涂改。减少涂改。Lets Lets practice!practice!在家庭里、在社会中，只要我们从自身做起，我们的行为就可以为实现和谐社会（harmonious society）起到推进作用。你们学校的English Newsletter正在以Doing Our Part（从自身做起）为题举行征文活动，请根据下列表格提示的内容，用英语写一篇征文 （2011扬州中考试题）行行 为为作作 用用在家在家庭里庭里 帮助父母做家务事帮助父母做家务事 和父母多交流和父母多交流 让父母不太累让父母不太累 在社在社会中会中 不乱扔垃圾不乱扔垃圾 使环境美化使环境美化 展望：如果我们每个人展望：如果我们每个人要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2）必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；3）词数：100词左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。Doing Our Part We have grown up and its time for us to do something for our family and society.At home,_失分失分原因原因书写随意性书写随意性字数未限定字数未限定拼写错误多拼写错误多句式有毛病句式有毛病 Doing Our Part We have grown up and its time for us to do something for our family and society.At home,we should help our parents do the housework.They go to work during the daytime and they must be tired after a full days work.We do the house in order to let them have a rest.We should also talk with them more,it can help us understand each other better.In society,do not throw rubbish everywhere,we should throw it into the dustbin.It can make our environment more beautiful.Dont use plastic bags when going shopping,wed better use shopping baskets.If we use them too often,it will become white pollution.In a word,if each of us do our part from now on,our world will become a harmonious society.范文展示范文展示The structure of the article IntroductionMain body ConclusionSummary at homeyour own ideas In society 抄抄组组集集连连抓抓审审作文作文集句成段集句成段组段成篇组段成篇审清题意审清题意连词成句连词成句抓住要点抓住要点抄写规范抄写规范如何写作如何写作SummaryThank you for listening