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Every student in college wants to achieve high marks in their academic study.Obviously, no one in college doesnt want to achieve high marks in Example:14分分 切题切题. 表达表达思想清楚思想清楚,文字通顺文字通顺,连贯性连贯性较好较好,无无语言错误语言错误.11分分 - 切题切题. 表达表达思想清楚思想清楚,文字文字连贯连贯,无无语言错误语言错误. 8分分-基本基本切题切题.有些地方有些地方表达表达思想不够清楚思想不够清楚,文字勉强文字勉强连贯连贯,但有个但有个 别别语言错误语言错误. 5分分-基本基本切题切题.表达表达思想不够清楚思想不够清楚,连贯性连贯性差差,语言错误语言错误较多较多. 2分分-条理不清条理不清,思路紊乱思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误.写作复习写作复习:模写优秀文章模写优秀文章 背诵实用句型背诵实用句型 活学活用词汇句型活学活用词汇句型 学习写作技巧学习写作技巧Directions: For this part ,your are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Trying to Be A Good University Student .You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese ) below Example:.做合格大学生的做合格大学生的必要性必要性.做合格大学生的做合格大学生的必备条件必备条件（可以从德智体方面谈）（可以从德智体方面谈）.我计划我计划这样做这样做议论文议论文 说明文说明文 描述文描述文 * 议论文议论文写作特点写作特点要有论点和论据，而且往往从要有论点和论据，而且往往从正反两面正反两面来论述。来论述。 第一段的写作思路是：第一段的写作思路是： 做合格大学生，会怎么样（从做合格大学生，会怎么样（从正面正面论述）；论述）； 不能做到合格大学生，会怎么样（从不能做到合格大学生，会怎么样（从反面反面论述）；论述）； 所以我们要做合格的大学生（所以我们要做合格的大学生（结论结论）。）。 * 说明文说明文写作特点写作特点 从从几方面几方面或或几条几条来说明一个问题来说明一个问题 (某一机器的说明书一样通过某一机器的说明书一样通过1、2、3说明它的用途说明它的用途) 第二段的写作思路是：第二段的写作思路是： 我们从三个方面（德智体）来说明做合格大学生的必要性。我们从三个方面（德智体）来说明做合格大学生的必要性。 * 描述文描述文写作特点写作特点以以“人人”为中心描述一个为中心描述一个“做做”的过程。的过程。跟上两段相比，本段的主语多为人称代词。跟上两段相比，本段的主语多为人称代词。它要它要与第二段相呼应与第二段相呼应进行描述。进行描述。 第三段的写作思路是：第三段的写作思路是：.议论体的主题句议论体的主题句 .说明体的主题句说明体的主题句.描述体主题句描述体主题句It is very necessary to be a good university student . There are three aspects of necessities to be a good university student.What I will do in the future is the following. Good Health . Importance of good health . Ways to keep fit. My own practice.It is very important to have good health .（将名词 importance变成形容词important）.There are four ways to keep fit for me .（用 there be 句型）.My own practices are the following .（采用原词） para.1 (3 sentences) sentence 1 从正面论述从正面论述 sentence 2 从反面论述从反面论述 sentence 3 小结小结 para.2 (6 sentences) sentence 1 sentence 2 sentence 3 sentence 4 sentence 5 sentence 6 德德智智体体Example:1. It is very necessary to be a good university student . 2. There are three aspects of necessities to be a good university student.3. What I will do in the future is the following.npara. 3 (3 sentences) sentence 1 德德 怎么做怎么做 sentence 2 智智 怎么做怎么做 sentence 3 体体 怎么做怎么做 四级作文开头的写法：四级作文开头的写法：n现象法现象法n观点法观点法n引用法引用法n对立法对立法n数据法数据法n问题法问题法1. 现象法现象法nExample: 关于如何解决年轻人社会责任感不强的问题的文章开头关于如何解决年轻人社会责任感不强的问题的文章开头In recent years, there is an increasing number of people, especially the young, who pay little attention to the social responsibility. According to a survey, most people think youngsters are becoming more selfish and less warm-hearted and their concern is connected more with their personal happiness over that of the society.Exercise:n如何在建设中保护环境如何在建设中保护环境n如何减轻中小学生负担如何减轻中小学生负担 The problem of protecting environment in the course of economic development has now been in the limelight(众人注意的中心).Now there is a growing concern over the heavy burden, both academic and psychological, our children have to bear.套用句型：套用句型：n1. Recently the problem of has drawn public attention. .arouse worldwide attention.n2. Recently the issue of has been brought to public attention. has been brought into focus. has been in the limelight. 2.观点法观点法nExample: 经济对人们思想意识影响经济对人们思想意识影响Now people in growing numbers are coming to hold the idea that the economy has big influence on people s mind.1. Now people in increasing numbers are beginning to accept that 2. people in significant numbers are coming to be aware that3.Now people become increasingly aware/conscious of the importance of . 套用句型：套用句型：引用法引用法. “Knowledge is power.” such is the remark made by Bacon.This remark has been shared by more and more people . .“Education is not complete with graduation.” Such is the opinion of a great American philosopher. Now more and more people share his opinion. In our own days we are used to hearing such traditional complains as this . 套用句型套用句型nThere is an old saying which goes like thisn A famous man once remarkedn It is said thatn对立法对立法 : 先引出其他人的不同看法先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提出自己然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法的看法或者偏向于某一看法,适用于有争议性的主适用于有争议性的主题题. n1. When asked about., the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that . But I think/view a bit differently. n2. When it comes to . , some people believe that . Others argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true . There is probably some truth in both arguements/statements , but (I tend to the former/latter .) n3. Now, it is commonly/generally/widely believed/held/acknowledged that . They claim/believe/argue that . But I wonder/doubt whether. 对立法对立法exercisen大学生是否可以找兼职工作大学生是否可以找兼职工作数据法数据法n电视对儿童的影响电视对儿童的影响In recent years, with the development of science and technology, 80 percent of all homes in China have satellite TV, offering as many as 50 channels. It has great impact on children.Exercise:n年轻人喜欢丁克家庭年轻人喜欢丁克家庭Within recent years, the tendency of booming up of DINK family has become more and more obvious. It is estimated that about 35 percent of married couples are reluctant to have a baby.n According to a survey,.n It is estimated thatn The survey conducted by indicates that6 问题法问题法n青少年犯罪Why is there a growing number of juvenile delinquency in society? Opinions vary widely.一、一、 the + est + 名词名词 + (that) + 主词主词 + have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc) Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen. 二、二、Nothing is + er than to + V Nothing is + more + 形容词形容词 + than to + V Nothing is more important than to receive education. 加分句型加分句型三、三、 can not emphasize the importance of too much.（再怎么强调.的重要性也不为过。） We can not emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much. n四、四、There is no denying that + S + V . （不可否认的（不可否认的.） There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse. 不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。 五、五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子句子 （全世界都知道（全世界都知道.） It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us. 六、六、There is no doubt that + 句子句子 （毫无疑问的.） There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired. 毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。 七、七、An advantage of is that + 句子句子 （.的优点是.） An advantage of using the solar energy is that it wont create (produce) any pollution. 使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。 八、八、The reason why + 句子句子 is that + 句子句子 （.的原因是的原因是.） The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air九、九、So + 形容词形容词 + be + 主词主词 + that + 句子句子 （如此（如此.以致于以致于.） So precious is time that we cant afford to waste it. 时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。十、十、Adj + as + Subject（主词）（主词）+ be, S + V （虽然（虽然.） Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. 虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。 nExercise:n近年来,研究生报考人数逐年增加,试分析原因并进行评论 原因分析类作文n1段段: 现象现象/ 引言引言n2段段: 原因分析原因分析n3段段: 结论措施结论措施1段段: 概述考研热这一社会现象概述考研热这一社会现象2段段: 阐述研究生报考人数剧增背后的原因阐述研究生报考人数剧增背后的原因3段段: 总结评述总结评述,利弊分析并得出结论利弊分析并得出结论: 报考人数增加报考人数增加 是一件好事是一件好事
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