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专题五 短文改错 第2讲 名词、冠词、代词和连接词限时40分钟下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(), 并在其下面写上该加的词。删除: 把多余的词用斜线()画掉。修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。1One Saturday morning, Dad and I was eating breakfast while we heard a knock on the door. I rushed to open the door. There was our neighbor Miss Lydia, who draws picture for childrens books. “Good morning, Min! ”Miss Lydia said, looking happily to see me. “Hello, Miss Lydia. Wont you come in? ”I said, remembering my best manners. Miss Lydia came in, joined us in the breakfast table, but said to my dad that she would like both of us be her models in one of her books. What a great news! I would finally get to be in a book! I jumped off his chair and run to give Miss Lydia a big hug.答案:One Saturday morning, Dad and I was eating breakfast while we heard a knockwere whenon the door. I rushed to open the door. There was our neighbor Miss Lydia, who draws picture for childrens books. “Good morning, Min!” Miss Lydia said, lookingpictureshappily to see me. “Hello, Miss Lydia. Wont you come in?” I said, remembering myhappybest manners. Miss Lydia came in, joined us in the breakfast table, but said to my dadat andthat she would like both of us be her models in one of her books. What a greattonews! I would finally get to be in a book! I jumped off his chair and run to givemy ranMiss Lydia a big hug.2My uncle and aunt had only one children and he was young. My uncle often came back home from work very much late when my aunt and their child was asleep. He usually opened the front door with his key and came into the room quiet. One night he forgets to bring his key. He had to ring a door bell, but my aunt didnt wake up. He rang it again. Again nothing happened. Then my uncle knocked the bedroom window and even shouted loudly. Still my aunt didnt wake up. She thought for a moment. At last he had an idea. He began to cry like a smaller child. Immediately, my aunt woke up but opened the door for him.答案:My uncle and aunt had only one children and he was young. My uncle oftenchildcame back home from work very much late when my aunt and their child was asleep.wereHe usually opened the front door with his key and came into the room quiet. Onequietlynight he forgets to bring his key. He had to ring a door bell, but my aunt didnt wakeforgot theup. He rang it again. Again nothing happened. Then my uncle knockedthe bedroomat或onwindow and even shouted loudly. Still my aunt didnt wake up. She thought for aHemoment. At last he had an idea. He began to cry like a smaller child. Immediately, mysmallaunt woke up but opened the door for him.and1. 【解析】第一句中childrenchild。名词前有one修饰, 所以用单数。2. 【解析】第二句中去掉much。very much主要用来修饰动词, very主要修饰形容词或副词。3. 【解析】第二句中waswere。主语是my aunt and their child, 是复数概念。4. 【解析】第三句中quietquietly。本句中quietly修饰谓语came into, 故用副词形式。5. 【解析】第四句中forgetsforgot。由前面的时间状语One night可知, 此处用一般过去时。6. 【解析】第五句中athe。此处特指我叔叔家的门铃。7. 【解析】第八句中knocked后面加at或on。表示“敲门”要用knock at/on the door。8. 【解析】第十句中SheHe。根据语境, 我叔叔在门外思考了一会, 想到一个好主意。9. 【解析】第十二句中smallersmall。根据句意, 他开始像一个小孩子那样哭起来, 语境中没有比较。10. 【解析】第十三句中butand。根据句意, 我婶子立刻醒来并打开门, 连接词表示前后是顺承关系。3It is good to see that today more people have realized the importance exercising and are playing sports regular. But the problem is that there are not enough sports facilities to meet the public growing demand. I love playing basketball and often play with my friends on weekends. Therefore, it is difficult to rent a basketball field and impossible to find a free one. It seems that all courts in the city were always full. Weather permitted, we can play in outdoors. But on rainy days or in winter we have to turn to indoor courts. There are not much in my city, and the charge is expensive. The government should build more public sports facilities, so easier accesses will encourage more people to participate in sports.答案:It is good to see that today more people have realized the importance ofexercising and are playing sports regular. But the problem is that there are not enoughregularlysports facilities to meet the public growing demand. I love playing basketball andpublicsoften play with my friends on weekends. Therefore, it is difficult to rent a basketballHoweverfield and impossible to find a free one. It seems that all courts in the city were alwaysarefull. Weather permitted, we can play in outdoors. But on rainy days or in winter wepermittinghave to turn to indoor courts. There are not much in my city, and the charge ismanyexpensive. The government should build more public sports facilities, so easierhighaccesses will encourage more people to participate in sports.access4Advertising informs consumers about newer products available on the market. It gave us information with everything from shampoo to toothpaste to computers and cars. But there is one serious problems with this. The information are actually very often misinformation. It tells us the products benefits but hides its disadvantages. Advertising not only leads us to buy things that we dont need and cant afford, but it confuses our sense reality. “Zoom toothpaste prevents bad teeth and gives you the white teeth! ”the advertisement tells us. And it doesnt tell us the complete truth that a health diet and a good toothbrush will have the same effect.答案:Advertising informs consumers about newer products available on the market. Itnewgave us information with everything from shampoo to toothpaste to computersgives on/aboutand cars. But there is one serious problems with this. The information are actuallyproblem isvery often misinformation. It tells us the products benefits but hides itstheirdisadvantages. Advertising not only leads us to buy things that we dont need and cant afford, but it confuses our sense reality. “Zoom toothpaste prevents bad teethofand gives you the white teeth!” the advertisement tells us. And it doesnt tell us theButcomplete truth that a health diet and a good toothbrush will have the same effect.healthy1. 【解析】第一句中newernew。根据句意, 广告告知消费者新产品, 没有比较之意。2. 【解析】第二句中gavegives。由全篇时态可知应用现在时态。3. 【解析】第二句中withon/about。根据句意, 此处想表达“关于”, 故用on/about。4. 【解析】第三句中problemsproblem。由前面one可知, 此处用单数。5. 【解析】第四句中areis。主语the information是不可数名词, 故谓语用单数。6. 【解析】第五句中itstheir。此处代替前文products, 是复数名词的所有格, 故用their。7. 【解析】第六句中sense后面加of。sense of reality真实感, 现实感。表达“感”或“觉”时要用sense of. . . 。8. 【解析】第七句中去掉第一个the。复数名词泛指一类事物时, 不用冠词。9. 【解析】第八句中AndBut。根据前后文的句意可推知, 此处是转折而不是顺承关系。10. 【解析】第八句中healthhealthy。此处修饰名词应该用形容词。
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