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疯狂专练十一 代词误用单句改错 短文改错基础题单句改错1. Ill appreciate that if you can phone me to tell me the exact time._2. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days._3.I have a 5-year-old sister. Sometimes she fights against myself for candies._4. It seemed that their equipment didnt work. A young man came up into the crowd and offered to examine them._5.Just then, a woman came, saying that the dog was her and that I could take it away as she had some more dogs at home._6.That didnt take long for me to change my thoughts from that coin to those small opportunities that I had stepped on or passed by._7. The water in the cup is hotter than it in the bottle._8. Neither of the arrows hit the target._9. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by me._10. I always understoodthat our water recycling systemswere better than that of other countries._易错题一、【2019湖南长沙一中高三月考】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Lady and gentlemen,Welcome. Let me introduce my hometown to you. I hope you will enjoy the beautiful countryside with me as your guide.In first glance, my hometown is a very ordinary place, which is not different from any another town. There are two thousand people living here, but very little shops or restaurants, so people have to go to the mall in the city. Why does travelers come from all over the country to visit our town then? Some of the scenery in this area ranks among best in the country. It is a place where you can see many tall maple trees, that wide roads run alongside farms, and where a big river flows with countless ducks on it. With such many beautiful things to see, my hometown appeals to many professional photographers.I think you will have a good time there.二、【2019辽宁高三开学考试】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。What qualities do you think heroes should have? To me, heroes are brave and helpful. Theyre people you respect of. My heroes are the volunteers who go to the earthquake-hit areas last week. The disaster caused great damages to the areas. Therefore, the volunteers efforts relieved the victims suffering. They helped the victims by giving themselves food, water and shelter. They were also many doctors and nurses who volunteered help the wounded. The rescue work turned out dangerously, but no one showed fear nor gave up rescue the unfortunate people. I think nothing is equal to which the brave people did in the earthquake.高考题【2019全国新课标III】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Ive had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to opens a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it required a lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one. I want my cafe have a special theme such as like “Tang Dynasty”. In the cafe, customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment what is created for them. If I succeed in manage one, I will open more. I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city. Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.模拟题一、【2019重庆南开中学高三第四次教学质量检测】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Dear Tom,How are you doing? I wonder that you could sell some Chinese knot for me. I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and another materials. They look really beautifully in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches length and 4 inches wide. In China, these knots stand friendship, love and good luck. People can either give them as gifts to friends nor hang them in their houses. There are only 12.99 US dollars each. If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let you write to me. Besides, do let me to know if you need further information. Thank you!Li Hua二、【2019黄冈中学等八校高三第二次联考】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。China and Western country may have different cultural beliefs about certain animals. But when it comes to pigs, we somehow reach an agreement that pigs are lazy, ugly, stupidly and shameless. Neither of these words describing pigs are exactly positive. Moreover, the truth is what pigs have some good qualities. And theres probably no good time to clear their names than now, with the arrival of the Year of the Pig on Chinese Spring Festival, which fell February 5 this year. According to a paper publishing in 2017, pigs can tell between those who treat them well or those who dont. Perhaps these are the qualities of pigs to keep it in mindtheir intelligence, cuteness and patience.13答案与解析基础题单句改错1.【答案】that改为it【解析】考查代词。it指代后面的if引导的条件状语从句。句意：如果你在合适的时候给我打电话我将不胜感激。故that改为it。2.【答案】your改成my【解析】根据前面的“me”可知，指的是“我的(中学时代)”。故把your改成my。3.【答案】myself改成me【解析】句意：有时她为了糖果而跟我打架。结合句意可知，此处不是用反身代词，主语跟宾语不是同一人，应用代词宾格，故把myself改成me。4.【答案】them改成it【解析】equipment（设备）是不可数名词。故把them改成it。5.【答案】her改为hers【解析】表示“她的”，在句中作表语用名词性物主代词hers，相当于her dog。故her改为hers。6.【答案】That改成It【解析】这句话用了句型it takes sb. some time to do sth. (花费某人时间去做某事)，这里“it”做形式主语。故把That改成It。7.【答案】itthat【解析】考查代词。that相当于the+名词，为特指；it指同一事物，that指同类事物。（杯中的瓶中的水并不是同一杯水。）故把it改为that。8.【答案】Neither None【解析】考查不定代词。句意：没有一支箭射中目标。此处的箭不止两支，neither表示“两者都不”，none表示“（三者或三者以上）都不”，所以Neither改为None。9.【答案】me改为myself。【解析】考查反身代词。句意：最初，我认为我什么都知道，可以自己做决定了。这里指作者自己做决定，根据主语I可知，应该用myself，故把me改为myself。10.【答案】第二个thatthose【解析】考查指示代词。句意：我一直认为我们的水循环系统比其他国家好。根据句意可知，在表示比较的句型中指代比较的事物，单数或不可数名词用that,复数用those，此处根据前文的“systems”得知应用复数形式。故将第二个that改成those。易错题一、【答案】1.LadyLadies2.InAt3.anotherother4.littlefew5.orand6.doesdo7.best前面加the8.thatwhere9.suchso10.therehere【解析】这是一篇说明文。作者给来到自己家乡的人介绍家乡风景。1.考查名词的数。句意：女士们先生们。lady为可数名词，此处前面没有冠词，故用复数形式。故Lady改为Ladies。2.考查固定短语。句意：乍一看，我的家乡是一个非常普通的地方，与其他城镇似乎没什么两样。固定短语at first glance“乍一看；初看”。故In改为At。3.考查代词。短语any other“任何其他的”，故another改为other。4.考查代词。句意：有两千人住在这里，但是没有什么商店和餐馆，所以人们不得不去城里的购物中心。下文“shops”与“restaurants”为可数名词，需要few修饰。故little改为few。5.考查连词。“shops”与“restaurants”为并列名词，故or改为and。6.考查主谓一致。句意: 那么为什么全国各地的游客都来参观我们的小镇呢?本句主语为“travelers”，故助动词应用do。故does改为do。7.考查冠词。句意：这个地区的一些风景是全国最好的。best为形容词最高级，前面需要定冠词。故best前面加the。8.考查定语从句连接词。句意：在这里，你可以看到许多高大的枫树，宽阔的道路沿着农场延伸，还有一条大河，河里有无数的鸭子。本句为定语从句修饰先行词“place”，且先行词在从句中做地点状语应用关系副词where。故that改为where。9.考查固定短语。句意：有这么多美丽的东西可以看，我的家乡吸引了很多专业摄影师。固定短语so many“如此多的”，故such改为so。10.考查代词。句意：我想你们在这里会玩得很开心。根据上文可知作者是在家乡给别人介绍当地风景，应该是“这里”。故there改为here。【点拨】第3处中，注意代词other与another的辨析。another泛指，表示三个或三个以上的人或物中不确定的另一个。other泛指，其后常接可数名词复数形式（不可数名词亦可），意为其他的。此外，类似的代词还有：the other指已知的两个人或物中的一个；others=other+名词，泛指别的人或物；the others指“一定范围内其余的人或物”，如果被指代的是不可数名词，则用the rest指代。二、【答案】1.去掉of2.gowent3.damagesdamage4.ThereforeHowever5.themselvesthem6.TheyThere7.help前加to8.dangerouslydangerous9.rescuerescuing10.whichwhat【解析】这是一篇记叙文。短文中叙述了作者心中的英雄应该具备哪些品质。第一处：考查动词。分析句子可知，“people”为先行词，在后面的定语从句中作“respect”的宾语。所以of多余。故去掉of。第二处：考查一般过去时。由“last week”可知，定语从句为一般过去时。故将go改成went。第三处：考查名词。cause damage to“对.造成伤害”为固定短语，damage为不可数名词。故将damages改成damage。第四处：考查副词。分析句子可知，前后语意表示转折，且有标点符号，所以以用however表示转折。故Therefore将改成However。第五处：考查代词。give sb. sth. “给某人某物”，由“the victims”可知，“give”后的间接宾语为“them”。故将themselves改成them。第六处：考查全部倒装。分析句子可知，本句为there be 句型，为全部倒装句。故将They改成There。第七处：考查动词不定式。volunteer to do sth. “自愿做某事”为固定短语。故help前加to。第八处：考查形容词。turn out“结果是,被证明是”,多用过去时态，用法为turn out + (to be)+ adj./n.。故将dangerously改成dangerous。第九处：考查动名词。give up doing sth.“放弃做某事”为固定短语。故将rescue改成rescuing。第十处：考查连接代词。be equal to “与.相等”其中“to”为介词后接宾语从句作宾语，宾语从句中“what”作“did”的宾语。what在引导名词性从句时有两个重要的特点：一是它在相应的名词性从句中一定有含义，常表示“什么”，“所的”，“的样子”等；二是它在相应的名词性从句中一定做成分，而且常做主语，宾语或表语。故将which改成what。【点拨】反身代词是指主语与宾语同为一人或物，表示一个动作回归到该动作执行者身上。反身代词放在名词或代词（主格）后面（也可放在句尾）起强调作用。第五处中，该句的主语是“They”，指代“volunteers”，而后文的方式状语，则是指“victims”，并非同一人，故将themselves改为them。高考题【答案】1. opensopen2. requiredrequires3. ordinarilyordinary4. cafe后面加上to5.去掉like6. yourselvesthemselves7. whatthat/which8. managemanaging9. citycities10. ana【解析】这是一篇记叙文，本文讲述了作者的梦想是开咖啡馆。1. 考查不定式的用法。不定式作表语，to后用动词原形。故把opens改为open。2. 考查动词的时态。短文的主体时态都是现在时，故把required改为requires。3. 考查形容词的用法。修饰名词“cafe”，应用形容词，ordinarily是副词。故把ordinarily改为 ordinary。4. 考查动词的固定搭配。want sb. to do sth.想要某人做某事。故在have前加to。5. 考查介词的用法。such as和like都是用来举例子，重复了。故把like删除。6. 考查代词的用法。“customers”是句子的主语，故把yourselves改为themselves。7. 考查定语从句。先行词“environment”在从句中作主语，指物，关系代词用that/which。故把what改为that/which。8. 考查固定短语。succeed in doing something意为“成功做了某事”，是固定短语。故把manage改为managing。9. 考查名词单复数。“many different”后跟可数名词的复数形式。故把city改为cities。10. 考查冠词的用法。an用在元音音素前，a用在辅音因素前。unique是以辅音音素开头的单词，用a。故把an改为a。模拟题一、【答案】1. thatif/whether2. knotknots3. anotherother4. beautifullybeautiful5. lengthlong6. stand后面加上for7. noror8. ThereThey/These9. youthem/him10.去掉to【解析】本文是一篇请求信。作者请求对方帮自己销售一些亲手做的中国结。1. 考查宾语从句连接词。句意：近来如何？我想咨询你是否可以为我卖些中国结？此处为宾语从句，且根据句意可知应用whether/if表“是否”。故that改为if/whether。2. 考查名词单复数。句意：我想咨询你是否可以为我卖些中国结？“Chinese knot”（中国结）是可数名词，且前面有“some”修饰。故knot改为knots。3. 考查代词。句意：我自己用红丝线，布料和其他材料制作的。other+名词复数表示“其他的”。故another改为other。4. 考查形容词。句意：它们看起来很漂亮，都是钻石形状。此处“look”是系动词，意为“看起来”，后跟形容词做表语。故beautifully改为beautiful。5. 考查形容词。句意：它们看起来很漂亮，都是钻石形状，大约5英寸长，四英寸宽。此处为“and”连接的两个并列结构。故length改为long。6. 考查动词短语。句意：在中国，中国结代表作友谊、爱和好运。stand for“代表”。故stand后面加上for。7. 考查固定搭配。句意：它们或作为礼物而被赠送，或挂在家里。此处考查固定搭配eitheror要么要么。故nor改为or。8. 考查代词。句意：每个只需卖12.99美元。此处考查代词的指代问题，用They/These指代these knots。故There改为They/These。9. 考查代词。句意：如果有人想要更多地了解中国结，让他们联系我。根据句意可知此处指代错误。故you改为them/him。10. 考查动词搭配。句意：此外，如果你需要更详尽的信息一定要让我知道。此处考查固定搭配let sb. do sth.“让某做某事”。故去掉to。二、【答案】1. countrycountries2. stupidlystupid3. NeitherNone4. MoreoverHowever5. whatthat6. goodbetter7. February 5 前面加on8. publishingpublished9. orand10. it去掉【解析】本文是一篇说明文，介绍了猪的几个优点：聪明、可爱和有耐心。第一处：考查名词。句意：中国和西方国家可能对某些动物有不同的文化观念。此处表示不只一个国家，应该用复数，故country改为countries。第二处：考查形容词。句意：一谈到猪，我们会认为它们是懒惰的、丑陋的、愚蠢的和无耻的。此处用形容词作表语，故stupidly改成stupid。第三处：考查代词。句意：这些形容猪的词语都不是积极的。neither两者都不，none是指三者及三者以上都不，此处指lazy, ugly, stupid and shameless四者，故Neither改成None。第四处：考查逻辑连词。句意为：这些词没有一个是积极的，但是事实上猪的确有一些好的品质。根据句意可知此处表示转折，故Moreover改成However。第五处：考查表语从句。句意参考上题解析，分析句子结构可知此处为表语从句，从句成分完整，应该用that引导，无实义，只起连接作用，故what改that。第六处：考查形容词比较级。句意：随着今年2月5日猪年的到来，没有比现在更好的时间来为猪正名了。“than”表明此处需要用比较级，故good改成better。第七处：考查介词。句意参考上题解析。表示“在具体某一天”用介词on，故February 5 前面加on。第八处：考查非谓语动词。句意：根据2017年发表的一篇文章，猪能分出谁对它们好，谁对它们不好。“paper”和“publish”间是逻辑上的动宾关系，表示被动，此处用过去分词作后置定语，故publishing改成published。第九处：考查固定搭配。句意参考上题解析，考查连词。tell between A and B，区分A和B之间的区别，故or改成and。第十处：考查代词。句意：也许我们应该记住猪的品质聪明、可爱和有耐心。分析句子结构可知，已经有“qualities”作“keep”的宾语，“it”是多余的，故it去掉。
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